Hi Everyone! I would really appreciate feedback on my first hub (bring it on! I can take it!)
Here is the link: http://divorcepeacelove.hubpages.com/hu … e-and-Love
I just read your Hub and honestly, it sounds like a blog or journal entry rather than an article that would interest others. It is purely personal. If it were not written in the first person more would find it useful. Right now the title certainly should draw readers. I love that title. But the content needs to be kicked up a notch. Maybe talk more about the struggle of finding a great place in the area or that one's home needs to be accessible to daycare. It is also very short. You may want to increase the length and even add a video, photo or something to add interest.
I hope this helps. And remember the more you write, the better you will get. Welcome to HubPages.
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