Newbie, feedback appreciated.

  1. jochoa profile image60
    jochoaposted 5 years ago

    My first article, any feedback or criticism is appreciated: … r-computer

  2. Cagsil profile image83
    Cagsilposted 5 years ago

    Welcome to Hubpages! smile

    However, I think your first hub was a good attempt at writing a hub. You have a compliment from the person who commented on your hub, but I find your hub a little short on content and you do not have enough keywords/tags.

    But, don't let that get to you. You're new. wink

    On a side note, please read the FAQ's page and visit the Learning Center, so you can completely understand Hubpages as a writers site.

    Do enjoy your time here. Try to have fun. smile

  3. RedElf profile image85
    RedElfposted 5 years ago

    Well said, Cagsil - always valuable advice - and welcome to HubPages, jochoa!