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My first book review

  1. mary615 profile image94
    mary615posted 5 years ago

    http://mary615.hubpages.com/hub/Confess … ook-Review

    I've never done a book review before.  Please tell me what you think of this? Thanks.

  2. Dame Scribe profile image60
    Dame Scribeposted 5 years ago

    Hi Mary smile well, I thought it was great until I hit the section about peeves tongue and my eyes went all - well, twas hard on my old eyes. I would suggest you change it into italics rather than bold. Leave the sub-title bold but not the list. Otherwise smile it sounds like a great book.

    1. mary615 profile image94
      mary615posted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Thanks so much for your input.  I'll change from bold to italics.  I read a lot and would like to more book reviews.  That was kind of fun to do.

  3. mary615 profile image94
    mary615posted 5 years ago

    Hi Dame, I made the changes, and it is certainly easier to read.  Thanks again!

 
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