Vagabond Mystic at it again

  1. vagabond mystic profile image56
    vagabond mysticposted 5 years ago

    Please review and give it your best sho t . Thank- You ! V. M.

  2. QuestionMaster profile image89
    QuestionMasterposted 5 years ago

    You use far too many quotation marks.
    It reads more like prose than an article.
    It is basically a big block of text with no subtitles, pictures or other mediums to break it up or maintain interest.

  3. vagabond mystic profile image56
    vagabond mysticposted 5 years ago

    Thank you question master , not sure why I am even writing this stuff , never had a thought of it until recently . Really not even sure what to do with it . Never meant to write anything about this subject in my life , somehow it seems out of my control . Hope I'm not intrudeing ,just got to get it out . Thank you ,sincerely . Vagabond Mystic

 
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