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Extreme Hub Makeover Help Please!

  1. Blessed53 profile image59
    Blessed53posted 5 years ago

    Hi there!  I would appreciate any constructive criticism or suggestions for improving the content, appearance, readability, enjoyment, or anything else about my Hubs. These are my first four, and I realize my second one was rather controversial or unpopular or something like that I think mainly because I came on a little too strongly, although I think many times passion is a writer's strength.  I believe in honesty even when it hurts!

    Thanks a lot!  Here are my links:

    http://blessed53.hubpages.com/hub/mypoemsfromgod

    http://blessed53.hubpages.com/hub/My-Poems-From-God-2

    http://blessed53.hubpages.com/hub/My-Po … ve-His-Way

    http://blessed53.hubpages.com/hub/My-Po … artha-Jane


    Always, in all ways, to God the honor and glory!

    1. Hyphenbird profile image94
      Hyphenbirdposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      I read number2 and left you a comment. I saw you have broken up the two poems with a video and text. That looks good and creates a nice separation.

      1. Blessed53 profile image59
        Blessed53posted 5 years ago in reply to this

        Thanks for the read and the comment.  Glad you liked the format.  Appreciate your help and interest!

        God bless you!
        Blessed53

        Always, in all ways, to God the honor and glory!

  2. QuestionMaster profile image88
    QuestionMasterposted 5 years ago

    Quick tips:

    -Break up your big blocks of text more, with multiple text capsules.
    -Move videos over to the right so they don't cut the entire page.

    Otherwise, there's not much advice that can be given. If you're here for traffic or money, you'll probably not get much - creative writing is notoriously bad for getting either.

  3. Blessed53 profile image59
    Blessed53posted 5 years ago

    Dear QuestionMaster,
    Thanks for the time to look over my Hubs and the quick tips and post! All new information is helpful! Will take all tips into consideration to implement.

    Blessings!

 
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