I've been on HP for a little while now and recently published a new hub on bread (yes, as dull as it may seem). I was wondering if I could get some constructive criticism on the layout and content on the Hub, any constructive criticism would be appreciated.
Hi jeffreydjm, I’ve just read your hub and the layout is great, some nice pictures etc. The only little bit of constructive criticism is that you have a few paragraphs with the same heading, it would be better just to have one piece on white bread and one on brown rather than breaking them up into separate sections Other than that it’s very informative. Keep up the good work!
Thanks for the feedback both, I had a look at the paragraphs and agreed straight away, I think it's easy to overlook such things as an amateur writer. Either way, I adjusted the pros and cons section so that there is one section header for both paragraphs and used bullets and bold typeface to differentiate between the two sections without need for any extra headers.
Thanks for the feedback!
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