Please review my first Hub

  1. purpelypink profile image61
    purpelypinkposted 5 years ago

    it's a short poem.. smile

    1. sofs profile image87
      sofsposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Purpley Pink you could put a link to your hub...that makes things easier smile
      A good reminder...but I thought you could work a bit on the first part of the poem... Just my thinking.. maybe I am wrong smile Welcome to HP smile

  2. purpelypink profile image61
    purpelypinkposted 5 years ago

    Thank you for the review smile   I will work on that in my next poem smile

 
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