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  1. hazelwood4 profile image82
    hazelwood4posted 5 years ago
    1. Uninvited Writer profile image85
      Uninvited Writerposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      I think you should rewrite this paragraph

      "I believe that a definite part of delivering memorable customer service is product knowledge, and Hal definitely delivered on this with his outstanding recommendation that day. Hal, not only delivered on providing a great quality product, but he delivered on outstanding coffeehouse sociability with his friendly atmosphere he provides at the Daily Grind." Try and vary your words more.

      Other than that and a couple of grammatical errors it is well written.

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        hazelwood4posted 5 years ago in reply to this

        Thank you for the suggestions and the positive feedback Univited Writer.smile  I made some changes to the paragraph too.smile  I appreciate all the suggestions!

 
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