I think you should rewrite this paragraph
"I believe that a definite part of delivering memorable customer service is product knowledge, and Hal definitely delivered on this with his outstanding recommendation that day. Hal, not only delivered on providing a great quality product, but he delivered on outstanding coffeehouse sociability with his friendly atmosphere he provides at the Daily Grind." Try and vary your words more.
Other than that and a couple of grammatical errors it is well written.
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My 6-year-old grandson, Tristan, caught this bass ALL BY HIMSELF - the cast, the working of the lure, the landing, everything! The fish weighed right at 6 pounds. Not bad for a little kid, huh?
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Take out the spaces to read the article:Reddit Marriage Proposal: She Said Yes, Commenters Said Nohttp:// shine.yahoo.com/love-sex/reddit-marriage-proposal-ignites-backlash- 185756844.html
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After signing into my account(homepage), I check for hub comments and if there's nothing then I go to my account page to see traffic reports.What about you?
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