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Looking for constructive criticism

  1. letterme profile image79
    lettermeposted 5 years ago

    I feel I didn't get the composition in the essence I needed it to be.Send your feedback.

    http://letterme.hubpages.com/hub/Not-Mere-Silhouettes

    1. IzzyM profile image89
      IzzyMposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Nice story!

      However, browsers don't usually have the patience to read through text that is not broken up, so it's a good idea to either break the story up naturally with sub headings, else use images to break up the content, it is easier on the eye smile

      1. prettydarkhorse profile image63
        prettydarkhorseposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        nice advice!!

        you can also put the copyright thing towards the end of the texts and put the pic towards the middle and make the image smaller.

        1. IzzyM profile image89
          IzzyMposted 5 years ago in reply to this

          That was the other thing I forgot to mention. I see many new hubbers adding this copyright message, but there is no need.
          Down the bottom of every hub is a copyright notice put there by HP.
          And thieves just steal what they want anyway, notice or not.

    2. letterme profile image79
      lettermeposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you so much lzzyM and prettydarkhorse.Your guidance is really useful to me, and I am so happy that i found some forum like this to meet experienced ones like you.smile

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    ThomasRydderposted 5 years ago

    This forum really isn't for critiquing hubs, it's for discussion of topics.

    1. IzzyM profile image89
      IzzyMposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Excuse me, this forum - Extreme Hub makeover - is for critiquing hubs.

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        ThomasRydderposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        You're right...I apologise..I misread something...so sorry

        1. IzzyM profile image89
          IzzyMposted 5 years ago in reply to this

          Not to worry smile

          Easy mistake to make.

 
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