Not Extreme...but There's Always Room for Improvement!

  1. Rehana Stormme profile image93
    Rehana Stormmeposted 5 years ago

    Hi everyone. Care to critique this poem? Everything from the title to the use of words. Mucho gracias!

    Here it is:
    http://rehanastormme.hubpages.com/hub/T … ing-Dagger

 
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