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Need feedback on this hub of mine - I guess it's my best any sugges...

  1. lobobrandon profile image83
    lobobrandonposted 5 years ago

    Hi fellow hubbers,
    I've just tweaked one of my hubs and made it more interactive. It was the first tweak and I plan to tweak all similarly. Is it good give me both positive and negative feedback please.
    Thanks in advance
    http://lobobrandon.hubpages.com/hub/Tom … -Vegetable

    1. couturepopcafe profile image61
      couturepopcafeposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      A bit disjointed.  But you're right about the content.  Any plant grown for its edible root, stem, leaf or flower is considered a vegetable.  I've heard tomatoes referred to as fruity vegetables along with other curcubitaceae and solanaceae.

      1. lobobrandon profile image83
        lobobrandonposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        oh thanks for the suggestion. What do you think I could do to make it flow well?
        Is the content disjoint or which part?

        1. couturepopcafe profile image61
          couturepopcafeposted 5 years ago in reply to this

          It's just my opinion, of course.  I'm not an expert.  I think the last few paragraphs repeat the same information.  Maybe remove one of the YouTubes and one of the tomato images.  Pull the "More about tomatoes" capsule up and to the right so it's more of a magazine format.  I think the content is great so maybe add an unusual tomato recipe also in the right column.  Make sure you put the recipe into the hub title for more hits.

          1. lobobrandon profile image83
            lobobrandonposted 5 years ago in reply to this

            Good suggestion about the recipe. I'll do that tonight maybe smile

 
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