This is the first time I have tried to write a short story. I always wanted to write one.
Any feedback, tips, suggestions, criticism would be of great help.
Hi Kannanwrites, I enjoyed your lovely story. I really like the name you chose for the dog 'Baba', its an Irish name for baby.
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