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Feedback for my hub

  1. fromheart profile image58
    fromheartposted 4 years ago

    Please review my hubs and provide feedback and suggestions..I am greatful to those who help me with my writing.
    http://fromheart.hubpages.com/hub/what- … -computing
    http://fromheart.hubpages.com/hub/Cloud … -a-service
    http://fromheart.hubpages.com/hub/Best- … girlfriend

  2. dipless profile image87
    diplessposted 4 years ago

    I had a look at the gift ideas for girlfriend hub, the first thing I felt was that it was too cluttered, there is just too many, pictures, links, products etc. in there and this just detracts from the overall appearance. What you have written is good, but you could have done with a bit more detail and for it to be a bit longer, I personally aim for around 600 words give or take. But other than that good job.

    Remember this is just a personal opinion and others may completely disagree.

    1. fromheart profile image58
      fromheartposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you for providing me useful suggestions...

  3. Dame Scribe profile image61
    Dame Scribeposted 4 years ago

    I read your hub on 'Cloud computing' since I have no clue lol I think it's well done over all smile to the point, supporting graphics to your points and simple for the non-techie sorts wink a very good style to keep. smile