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Feedback on My First Hub Please?

  1. Andrea K Fleming profile image61
    Andrea K Flemingposted 4 years ago

    Thank you for taking the time to read it!

    http://andreakfleming.hubpages.com/hub/ … Techniques

    1. dipless profile image86
      diplessposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Hi it is a well written Hub, It is nicely broken down into sections, there's nothing worse than huge chunks of text so kudos on that smile

      I'd probably add a few more images and link to some useful sights such as the SLC and maybe a job site or some other appropriate hubs.

      As for the language, it is well written and informative.

      Welcome to Hubpages big_smile

    2. eddiecarrara profile image95
      eddiecarraraposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Hi Andrea, I thought you hub was good, it was written from experience and that 's what makes it unique. If you want to tweak your next hub just a little, I would suggest splitting up your paragraphs a little more(it just makes them easier to read).  You can add links to FAFSA or to collegeboard.org, hubpages will not allow links to affiliate sites or other sites that lead to affiliate landing pages. You will be safe adding links to collage sites and sites for collage loans. Hope this helps smile

  2. Andrea K Fleming profile image61
    Andrea K Flemingposted 4 years ago

    thanks so much, I'm still trying to learn which website links are ok to link to your hub and such.  thanks for reading!

  3. WriteAngled profile image92
    WriteAngledposted 4 years ago

    I'm reading this as someone who does not live in the US, so please excuse any obvious ignorance.

    You talk a lot about student loans, but do not provide information about how to get one. Is there a body that deals with this, in which case you need to provide a link.

    Suggestions for making an application for student/research funding of any type: links to funding bodies and places that give good advice on how to apply.

  4. Xenonlit profile image61
    Xenonlitposted 4 years ago

    The content is very good. The hub is thoughtfully and well written.

    I suggest that you break the bigger blocks of text into more easy to read segments. It's easier on the online reader's eyes.

    You could also separate the one hub into several sub nuggets, one for each sub topic.

    Overall, here's to more good writing and welcome!