Feedback pretty please

  1. msharpe profile image60
    msharpeposted 5 years ago

    I just started on this site yesterday and id like to make my hubs better if anyone would like to take the time to read my hubs and give me feedback id be very appreciative.
    http://msharpe.hubpages.com/hub/Long-Di … hip-Killer
    http://msharpe.hubpages.com/hub/Educati … orida-Keys
    http://msharpe.hubpages.com/hub/Mary-Ja … ng-Medical

    1. Alecia Murphy profile image91
      Alecia Murphyposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Hello,
      I think you're off to an excellent start. If I may suggest you lengthening your Budget Cuts Hub and maybe using multiple capsules.
      For the Mary Jane Hub, you may want to also try putting the information about the drugs into a chart or use some kind of visual to draw people in.
      And I think you LDR Hub is just fine. Bolding words always works to draw people in.
      Welcome to HubPages and I look forward to reading more of your work. I hope my advice was helpful.

 
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