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My first Hub

  1. Anna Adam profile image60
    Anna Adamposted 5 years ago

    Hello to every one,

    I have joined Hub pages 6 months ago. But unfortunately i could not submit any content on hub pages. I have just published a hub about Allied Healthcare Careers. I will be awaiting some constructive feed back from valued readers.

    Thanx

    Anna Adam

    1. snakeslane profile image82
      snakeslaneposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Hi Anna Adam. I checked out your profile page and your first Hub. Congratulations on the first hub, and welcome back to Hub Pages. There's a couple of typos in your profile, easy to fix. The hub is well written and good information for anyone looking for a career in health care. It reads a bit like a pamphlet you would pick up in a hospital waiting room. For me personally, would be more interesting if you could personalize it a bit so the reader feels like they are hearing from a real person. Just my thoughts. I am not in health care, so may not be qualified to speak to this. Regards, snakeslane

      1. Anna Adam profile image60
        Anna Adamposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        Thank you so much for spending time checking my hub. All rite i will try to make it personalize. Well can u plz let me know typos in my profile. It will be so nice of you. Regards, Anna

        1. snakeslane profile image82
          snakeslaneposted 5 years ago in reply to this

          Ok. Typos in profile are the two last words. It should be growth options.

          1. Anna Adam profile image60
            Anna Adamposted 5 years ago in reply to this

            Thanx again snakeslane

            1. snakeslane profile image82
              snakeslaneposted 5 years ago in reply to this

              You're welcome, are you going to publish this now as a Hub Anna?

  2. LoriSoard profile image78
    LoriSoardposted 5 years ago

    Even though you've been here a while, welcome to HP. I enjoyed your hub. I think you did a good job of covering many different options for people and links for additional info. I would just start adding some more hubs and link them together by using groups. The more hubs you have, the better you'll start to do.

    Also, make sure you have a summary. You may already have this, but it was something I missed when I first started writing articles and had to go back and add them to all of them.

    1. Anna Adam profile image60
      Anna Adamposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you for giving me feedback.

 
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