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Please help a true rookie! Hub feedback needed

  1. Turtlewoman profile image95
    Turtlewomanposted 5 years ago

    Hello Hubbers,
    I signed up 6 weeks ago, but finally started writing my first 2 Hubs last week. I could really use some honest feedback from you. I promise I can handle constructive criticism! (How else am I going to learn and grow?)

    http://turtlewoman.hubpages.com/hub/Ben … ose-Weight

    From a "future income potential" point of view, what do you think of this hub? I've tried to incorporate as much as I can from reading the Learning Center and Tutorials lately.
    Thanks in advance!!

    Cheers,

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    Website Examinerposted 5 years ago

    It is a very nice hub, and you have a good deal of targeted keywords and tags. Good length, structure, images, etc.. The only thing I noticed is that "It" in the title should be "They," since seeds are plural.

    1. Turtlewoman profile image95
      Turtlewomanposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you Website Examiner....ahhh back to grammar basics.

  3. couturepopcafe profile image61
    couturepopcafeposted 5 years ago

    I thought the article was well written, concise and informative. Change to: "How do they help you lose weight?" (from how does it help...) Adding a recipe is always helpful to the reader.

    Did you write a summary?

    1. Turtlewoman profile image95
      Turtlewomanposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you for editing my article, couturepopcafe

 
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