Just started, wondering if my posts are cohesive?

  1. insidiousglamour profile image79
    insidiousglamourposted 4 years ago

    I was just wondering if my hubs were cohesive and understandable as I tend to ramble. I try to offer my citations at the bottom of the article so people can research on their own after the fact. I'm just hoping my content matter isn't boring and that its obvious I'm trying to open up dialogue with people within their own families and social groups. A little feedback would go a long way for me please!

    1. John Holden profile image61
      John Holdenposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Your fears are groundless! I found your hubs very understandable, not all ways easy to read but that is a reflection on the content rather than the writing.
      They certainly aren't boring though maybe limited in appeal.

  2. insidiousglamour profile image79
    insidiousglamourposted 4 years ago

    Thanks for your response! Do you have any suggestions on how I can broaden the appeal of my articles? I want to reach people about philosophy and historical context, but I don't want to turn them off by citing things they aren't comfortable or familiar with.