I think you're off to a great start. The hub has interesting content and a dynamic layout. You might want to post a link to the hub in the post where you asked for a critique of it so hubbers can just go directly to your article.
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Looks pretty good to me. I noticed a rather large empty space between two paragraphs. Also, the large full-sized image on top is not conductive to displaying AdSense ads, so you may want to move it down and perhaps align it to the right. The formatting is good, otherwise, with the side-by-side columns and table. Text also seems to be appropriate. Welcome to HubPages!
Samir, you are welcome. I only made a cursory check of your English. By and large, your writing seemed correct to me.
Yes you are permitted to post links to your hubs for critique, on this forum and this forum alone. I suggest you read the description for this forum.
You are off to a great start Samir. This is a very well written hub. I really like the layout and the quotes and stats you added to the side.
There are some grammatical mistakes.
In your first paragraph, for example, "Neymar have caught " and "sensation have achieved" should both use the word "has" instead of "have." There is a spacing issue between the second and third sentence. "age.His "
I recommend using a grammar checker. I check all of my hubs and I find it very helpful. It almost always finds some kind of error I made. Word has a grammar checker, and I'm sure there are others online as well.
Samir, well done! you have just broken the ice like I did just over two months ago. Everyone here, I very well need a critique to my newest hub: http://beezico.hubpages.com/hub/Marriag … Each-Other
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