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Hello fello Hubbers - I would appreciate feedback on my first hub

  1. Kaili Bisson profile image97
    Kaili Bissonposted 4 years ago

    I just joined a few days ago and posted my first hub yesterday. I am already working on a second hub, but before posting it I thought I would reach out to see what I can learn from more experienced folks. So, here are my questions:
    1. Is the topic of my first hub - "The Battery Charleston" - interesting?
    2. Does the layout work or is there something I can do to improve the flow?
    3. Do the photos enhance or detract?
    4. Any comments or suggestions about how I can improve my style?

    Here it is:
    http://kailibisson.hubpages.com/hub/The … Charleston

    Thank you kindly...looking forward to reading your comments.

  2. Danette Watt profile image87
    Danette Wattposted 4 years ago

    Hi Kaili, welcome to Hub Pages!

    I just read your hub and did find it interesting to read. I have a couple suggestions and comments.

    Some subheadings would be helpful, such as "Charleston in the 1700s and 1800s" or "A walk down Murray Blvd"

    I was told to capitalize the title and subtitles, and use keywords in both. (If you aren't familiar you are with Search engine optimization and keywords you can find out more in the Learning Center, http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/contents)

    I think I would move the map to the bottom of your hub. It's best to leave that space for ads.  But your  photos added to the hub.

    It sounds from your profile that you'll have lots to write about in future hubs and I'm looking forward to reading them.

    1. Kaili Bisson profile image97
      Kaili Bissonposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Hi Danette...thank you for the tips. I will add some headings and tweak things a bit  :-)

  3. Dame Scribe profile image60
    Dame Scribeposted 4 years ago

    Welcome to HubPages smile you did a great job! I would maybe add travel and tourism to your tags also, which are popular topics wink

    1. Kaili Bisson profile image97
      Kaili Bissonposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you Dame...great ideas for the tags. I will be sure to add those in.

 
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