http://mariexotoni.hubpages.com/hub/Emb … n-Introver
some people seem to like it- this SHOULD be one of my better hubs, but it is sorely lacking..
Help please- I'm willing to re-write the whole thing.. prefer not to, rather just add..
The first thing I notice is the title. I don't think many people would type that in to a search engine. Maybe add "how to...". I dunno. Also. I kind of like sub headings that split content up and tell me what each section is about. That is my personal preference though, I have no idea if that would help with traffic.
I thought this was a great hub. Maybe try dropping "Embracing Being An" from the title, if that doesn't work you could try putting it in a different category. I definitely don't think the hub requires a re-write though, I found it very interesting and well-written.
Alright, I found too much text so you need to break them up more. Keep paragraphs at a guesstimate of anywhere from 6-8 or 12 lines long. When you write, answer the what, where, who, when, why and how. I had no idea what you were going on about and if nobody understands those terms, well .... I felt that I was taken all over the board and left abandoned with something but no idea what. You have some good tips just need a bit more organization.
I agree. I read it and thought it needed some breaking up. I like to see more paragraphs (text capsules) each with a separate heading. Otherwise, I think it's pretty good. I find the subject fasinating; even wrote about the same myself. I found a good video for mine.
Okay thank you! Gonna fix it up tomorrow
Just reread it, and I think it reads a lot better. Might be fun to add a poll so readers can answer; I think a poll sparks comments. Like ask: are you are you an introvert? Yes or No....
Just a suggestion: Look up successful Hubbers, ones that have been here a long time and read their work. I learn something new each day, but I really learn a lot by reading the "old timers" stuff.
I agree that the title isn't too search-engine-friendly. But you might get some traffic by emphasizing well-known names like Gandhi and Einstein. What phrases might someone type into Google when they were looking for famous introverts like these two?
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