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Please give me your feedback

  1. lbramos profile image47
    lbramosposted 4 years ago

    Hi,

    Can you please give me your feedback on this last hub of mine:

    http://lbramos.hubpages.com/hub/The-bla … enova?done

    Is there two many videos? How can I balance it more? It seems to be "too heavy"...

    If you have the chance, please take a look a a few other hubs of mine and tell me your opinion!

    I will do the same to your hubs if you want!

    1. Randy Godwin profile image93
      Randy Godwinposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      First off, too many spelling and grammatical errors in this hub.  And I didn't get past the first few paragraphs.  Sorry, you have a lot of cleaning up to do.  smile


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      1. lbramos profile image47
        lbramosposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        Thanks for the notice! Shame on me... it had too many errors... sad I've fixed it now!
        Thanks again for your feedback

  2. Dame Scribe profile image60
    Dame Scribeposted 4 years ago

    I would suggest moving some of the video's off to the side to maintain flow of the text. I thought I was at the end a few times. Over all, good job smile

    1. lbramos profile image47
      lbramosposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Thanks for the feedback, I'll try to fix that

      1. lbramos profile image47
        lbramosposted 4 years ago in reply to this

        I've changed the videos to the right of the text and for me it looks a lot better! Thanks for your advise!

  3. seanorjohn profile image80
    seanorjohnposted 4 years ago

    Well done for writing this hub in English when it is not your first language. Change 'why did it had to be white' to 'Why does it have to be white'.

    1. lbramos profile image47
      lbramosposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Corrected smile Thanks for the feedback smile

 
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