Break Me

Break Me

All these thoughts are getting to me...

Breaking in to my head...

Slipping consciousness I'm faded...

Am I here, or am, I dead...

Lonely, thoughts, are, gently creeping.....

Through, my empty eyes, no feeling..

I'm feeling, more dead, than alive..

Take my hearts will to, strive.....

(chorus)

Knock me down with selfish lies....

Bleeding through my empty cries...

Throw me back to total closure...

Satisfy the craving once more....

Numb me, with, empty, conclusions...

Leave me, to, my , own, solutions....

Dumb me, with, guilty, confessions

Lead me to face my own addictions...


And when, our , love, comes back, briefly..

Sobered eyes can now see clearly...


Memories, can be decieving...

They can even be missleading....


(Chorus)


Cloud my mind with toxic pollutions..

A captive of my own delusions..

Look within, try to remember...

Through the ashes, burns our Ember

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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you...

Totally heartbreaking. Would love to hear the music..


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Zayleen Pain 5 years ago from lost in my own minds lines Author

thank u so much ...its a song about leaving my ex so its pretty emotional and powerful but it is my favorite song ive written..I will have the music up soon im perfecting it now.


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DarkDisOrder 5 years ago from B.A.D. (Beyond All Dimensions)

You do seem to be song writer, wouldn't be surprised to see you on a rock or heavy metal video, your writing numbs the mind.


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Zayleen Pain 5 years ago from lost in my own minds lines Author

Thank you so much.That is the greatest compliment anyone could give for that is my very dream.


Malak Pain 5 years ago

Love this song forever??? I remember the time when this was written... Eternity was asleep in the other room, it was the first time we jammed with Nick at jacks house.... I'd give anything to relive just a moment of those times..


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Zayleen Pain 4 years ago from lost in my own minds lines Author

i will get it downloaded as soon as possible


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Zayleen Pain 4 years ago from lost in my own minds lines Author

thank you so much thats exactly what i want to do!!!


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goego 4 years ago from Loserland

Yes!!! Another twisted song writer, love it


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Zayleen Pain 4 years ago from lost in my own minds lines Author

Thank you and yes sir i am a twisted individual , and thats the way i like it . Normal is boring haha!

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