How to Make a Song



~Take a melody, some words...a burst of inspiration and stir gently~

That's all there is to it. No, not really...well it might be that easy for some, but not for others. Just so I don't feel like a total fraud, I should say at the outset that I've never sold a song, had one published nor had one performed by anyone of note. I'm just an enthusiast musing on the process and writing songs ( or trying to) is a relatively new obsession...and this is a long article. So if you want to get out now, while there's still time, I'll understand.


Why Write Songs..?


Of all the wordy arts, perhaps song is the one that can be most quickly felt...without thinking and without processing and judging. It just kind of floats into the consciousness of the listener. Like the music of a bird song, the beauty is in the sounds, and the meanings are in the melodic expression, thus even songs in alien languages can  resonate emotionally with the listener.


The Dangers


The power of music to persuade, inspire and unsettle has long been noted. The ancient Greeks were suspicious of it:


Musical innovation is dangerous to the State, for when modes of music change, the laws of the State always change with them.


Plato (428-347 BC) The Republic


The Spartans were moved to kept their music uncorrupted and plain by limiting the number of strings on their lyres, which meant that musicians could not perform the “subtler more dangerous modes”. Cicero recorded that when a famous musician visited Sparta he was observed to be unsettling the fighting men with his beautiful music. The lyre was inspected, and he was found to have added a number of new strings to increase versatility. It was subsequently confiscated.

Today there are parent groups, church organisations and concerned citizens who are devoted to decrying the corrupting influence of song, particularly its effect on vulnerable youth and indeed the emergence of rock 'n roll in the twentieth century was interpreted by some to signal the end of civilisation.

If music and song is dangerous it is because it connects with human emotion in some fundamental way. The language of song is rhythmic, a kind of magical incantation that has been with the human race for as far back as anthropologists can imagine. Rhythmic language, especially when paired with melody, has the power to stir our feelings and rattle our equilibrium on a non-rational level.

Consider the jingles of patriotism, and the chants of religion-and of course the pervading power of rhythmic language did not not escape the ear of advertisers, particularly in the middle of the twentieth century, when the rhyming jingle was at it's zenith:


Winston tastes good like a cigarette should


Dangerous, persuasive, inspiring, corrupting - song then, can be a powerful emotional driver.

Catchy


The Pleasures


We all have a song in us and many of us would probably, at one time or another, have considered writing a song or felt that we could write a song. Of course it's true, anyone can write a song, though producing one that will connect with others is more elusive a task. As George Bernard Shaw once remarked, “hell is paved with musical amateurs”.

I've written a small heap of songs, none of which I consider come even remotely close to 'hitting the mark'; a condition that sometimes causes frustration and sometimes despondency-but not for too long, as I'm always drawn back to the quest. Even professional songwriters have remarked that they can write a hundred songs but only one may achieve that universal connection.

I'm at the beginning of a long process of experimentation and perseverance and even if it takes years or I never produce that one great song, the pleasure of the process is reward enough. Wordsworth described poetry as “emotion recalled in tranquillity' and the same could be said of song. Song writing is my emotional catharsis- a release valve for unresolved feelings and a salve for old wounds. There is something about expressing your own unique perspective through the immediacy of song that is deeply satisfying.....even if you are the only person who understands it.

Unlike prose writing, songs do not require complex expositions; lyrics may be sparse or full, cryptic and obscure, fanciful, deeply personal and even nonsensical; whatever comes to mind, as long as they connect harmoniously with the ear. Who can make sense of the lyrics from Nirvana's Smells Like Teen Spirit, a hugely successful song?


A mulatto, an albino
A mosquito, my libido
Yeah, yeah, hey


A song doesn't have to make sense; it just has to sound good. Of course prose can offer vistas that songs cannot and one form of writing can energise the other. Kate Bush's phenomenally popular 1978 debut single Wuthering Heights was drawn from Emily Bronte's novel about wild passions on the English moors:


Cathy oh Cathy oh come home
I'm so co-o-o-old


Similarly Perry Como's Catch a Falling Star was reputedly inspired by a line in a John Donne poem, 'go and catch a falling star'. Such cross-fertilization is not uncommon -the Zombies A Rose for Emily is from a William Faulkner story, Radiohead's Banana.co is based on One hundred Years of Solitude by Gabriel Garcia Marquez and Suzanne Vega's Calypso is based upon one of the scenes from Homer's Odyssey.

So why am I writing a how-to hub if I haven't succeeded in producing a great song? Good question. Well that is something that probably cannot be taught. anyway.. it's something of a mystery why one song should connect universally where others have failed. Admittedly, this is from an amateur's perspective...in my quest though, I have done some study and picked up a few pointers about song construction which have been helpful to me. The creative talent bit is up to you...



The Craft

The elements of a song can be roughly broken down into subheadings:

Concept:


Most songs have a narrative or at least a theme forming the 'essence' of the song. A song theme can be about anything at all...sometimes something really unlikely. Joe Dolce, an accomplished musician, hit a universal note with listeners writing about disaffected immigrants, in “Shaddap Your Face”...a song that earnt him millions of dollars.

However writing for a particular genre might be more confining; if you're a hard-core hip hop artist your credibility might be at stake if you start getting into a hearts and flowers concept. Similarly country and Western songwriters probably wont be interested in concepts featuring urban issues and neither will their audience.

Good song writing requires focus and clarity and usually one cohesive idea, consistent throughout the song, is better than a lot of disjointed lyrics, no matter how poetically inspired they are. Some of the most popular song concepts, apart from the universal 'love' theme which is by far the most commonly used, have included friendship, escape, loss, hard times, family, protest and 'the times' -past present an future.


Chords:


Musical text books describe chords, which is short for accord, as triads being composed of three individual notes, or more technically: "tertian sonorities, constructed of thirds, relative to an underlying scale. Two note combinations are commonly referred to as intervals, technically known as dyads”. (Benward & Saker) Along with melody and rhythm, chords are a part of the three vital elements of music.

In the music theory things get a lot more complicated than that. To me however, chords are just positions on the guitar which, given the right progression, form the accompaniment for a melody. There are literally thousands of chords and I've only mastered a small amount. It can be very absorbing experimenting with chord progressions, discovering those which form a harmonious sequence and those that jar and sometimes a particular sound will evoke an image or a memory that can spark a lyrical idea.


Shaddap Your Face-Joe Dolce

Melody:


“A painter paints pictures on canvas. But musicians paint their pictures on silence.”
Leopold Stokowski

The melody of course is the tune and no matter how good the lyrics are if they don't meld with the melody the song will collapse structurally. This is perhaps the most challenging part of the songwriting process for a novice and yet it is also the most intriguing; it's awe-inspiring to imagine the infinite note combinations that can be produced and combined to create unique sounds. The language of music is mysterious to people like me, who can't read it, yet I [along with almost everyone else], am still able to respond to a melodic line and judge whether or not it is harmonious or discordant. I find a tune entirely by ear, experimenting trial and error style with chords on a guitar.

There is some dispute among professional songwriters over whether or not the capacity to read and write music is essential to the art of song writing. Certainly those who can't are at a great disadvantage, yet before the 12th century virtually no music was written down and a semi-quaver is as alien as to some native cultures as e=mc2, yet they still manage to produce songs. It's possible to acquire a deeper understanding of music without formal training as many wonderful musicians could testify to [though this should not be used as a rationalisation for being too lazy or obstinate to learn to read music]. The capacity to create music does appear to be innate to humans, whether they are musically literate or not. I 'm comforted by Elvis Presley, who once famously said; “I don't know anything about music. In my line you don't have to”.

An important aspect of melody I have learned about is pitch – a melody is a sequence of notes strung together and the pitch determines the shape and contour depending on how high or low it sounds -a melody that remains on the same pitch will be very dull and monotonous and typically melodies have arches that rise and fall. The motion is determined by the duration of a note and how quickly it goes up and down. One last important feature of a melody is musical phrasing. As musician Catherine Schmidt-Jones describes: “Melodies are often described as being made up of phrases. A musical phrase is actually a lot like a grammatical phrase. A phrase in a sentence (for example, "into the deep, dark forest" or "under that heavy book") is a group of words that make sense together and express a definite idea, but the phrase is not a complete sentence by itself. A melodic phrase is a group of notes that make sense together and express a definite melodic "idea", but it takes more than one phrase to make a complete melody.”
(connexions)

Once a melody for a new song is discovered, trills and slides and other embellishments can be added to the basic tune to makes the sounds more complex and layered and the introduction of other instruments playing the melody together in harmony often enriches the whole composition. Melody very much sets the mood for the lyrics -light and gay, sad and wistful, heavy and thumping or odd and quirky.


Throw Your Arms Around Me-Nick Seymour


Beat and Rhythm


The beat, or tempo is the pulse of the song and gives it it's 'feel' and the timing, fast or slow contributes to mood. A fast beat can drag you onto the dance floor and a slow one may draw you into a reflection. Beats can be unstressed or stressed; and rhythm is the beat that different instruments create; guitar, keyboards, bass, drums etc. and adds a rich dimension to music and it's the silences or rests between notes that help create mood and complexity.

In rock 'n roll the melody often has a backbeat, accentuating the offbeat and is usually supplied by the snare drum but as I have no band to play with I haven't concerned myself too much with backbeats, although there are software programs were such accentuations can be added if you have the instruments. Software instruments are available but these tend to sound, as one would expect, synthetic and unless that is a desired effect, while handy, they aren't ideal. Although these sophisticated technological tools can offer many benefits to the songwriter, many professionals will tell you that ultimately there is no substitute for getting together with real life musicians and experimenting. Having said, if you've got all the gear, some highly produced music is fantastic. As I write, I am playing Kanye West's very creative, My Beautiful, Dark Twisted Fantasy, and it is great listening...electro melancholia, as described by Rolling Stone.




Style


Punk, rock, pop, classical, broadway, swing, gothic, new-age, indie, alternative, folk, soul, blues, r&b, country, rap, jazz, hip hop, bluegrass -the list of musical genres is extensive but superficialities aside, when it comes down to it, it's the beat and rhythm that will often determine the style, at least in the popular song genres. When creating a song, I never consciously write to fit a category, though perhaps that has more to do with inexperience than a spirit of independence. I attempt to write the kind of music I enjoy listening to and I am of course, the product of a stream of influences. If I had to define my favourite style it would probably fall under the broad umbrella of folk/alternative.


What appeals to me most about this genre, apart from its intimacy, is it's authenticity, as evidenced below in the Missy Higgins video.. In the current musical climate, so many songs are slickly produced in recording studios using all manner of synthetic enhancement, it can be hard to detect the human element. While these songs are as smooth as polished ice and easy enough to listen too, they lack the rawness that can really give a song its personality. In any creative endeavour, developing a distinct style can be of great benefit, as your work becomes readily identifiable but even better is developing a distinctly original style. It's certainly possible to write within a particular genre and still be original, everyone is an original, with their own unique method of expression that will only be crushed by slavishly trying to emulate the work of others -a disaster creatively and probably commercially too as who would want an imitation when they can listen to the real thing?


The Wrong Girl-Missy Higgins

Lyrics:


Coming up with lyrics is very much an individual process and I doubt there could be any formula for success. I am however, beginning to learn the value of organisation; breaking down the concept or the songs 'story' into parts and then trying to capture the whole thing in one sentence helps me identify what can be discarded and what should be retained in order to maintain a consistent theme . Many professionals advise keeping your audience in mind at all times while writing in order to better “target” them. Perhaps this is good advice in some circumstances – writing for children for example. But I'm not trying to write for any particular audience or in any particular genre and the idea of conforming your ideas into what an imagined audience might like is unappealing, nor do I think it works. The most successful artists in the world have been highly original, not from being conformist or trying to please the fickle majority. Even if I fail miserably and my songs never connect with anyone at all, at least I will have been sincere. As a great writer (Orwell) once observed “for a creative writer possession of the truth is less important than emotional sincerity.”

Many succcessful songs tell a story. In the video below Kate Nash sings about the crumbling of a relationship. It's a common theme but she tackles it in an original way:


Foundation-Kate Nash


Orwell also had some good advice for the songwriter, although it was intended for writers in general: “A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus;

1. What am I trying to say?

2. What words will express it?

3. What image or idiom will make it clearer?

4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect? “(Politics and the English Language, 1946)

One of the biggest difficulties encountered in writing lyrics is no.4 Is this image fresh enough to have an effect? So often I've applied a lyric, been momentarily satisfied, then on re-reading discovered there was nothing particularly interesting about it and further, that it's probably been used a thousand times before. Clichés and idioms abound in songs and sometimes they work, sometimes they don't -usually they don't because an overworked phrase is likely to wash over a listener and not stir any particular response, except perhaps a yawn.

Despite the many innovations and transmutations over the decades, rhyme is still an important stylistic instrument of song. The rhythmic structure or metre of the lyrics will depend in part upon the melody as there has to be an harmonious accord between the two. While not all songs employ rhyme, they usually do as it's the assonance and consonance of verse that helps the song glide along instead of travelling over a bumpy ride, though the occasional dissonant divergence can make the trip interesting. Every verse of a song need not contain perfect rhyme; very often near-rhyme is used. Sometimes I have to consciously remove a perfectly rhyming word and substitute it with near-rhyme because it sounds too pat and hokey – I don't want to sound like Mother Goose. For the same reason I'll occasionally put in sentences that don't perform any kind of rhyming function at all, solely to break up the predictability.

In my own experience I'm aware there are certain personal pitfalls I must be alert to; in particular wordiness, over-dramatising and a certain penchant for lapsing into sentimentality. On wordiness I've found the advice below to be helpful and although the author was referring to poetry, it equally applies to song:

“Although every word must tell in prose, in poetry every word counts double, both for meaning and music, Therefore every word in poetry sounds twice as extra, if such a thing is possible. The line should never be padded with an extra word for the sake of the metre or rhyme ---it will be painfully apparent.” (Stillman)

As with any craft, good technique can generally only be acquired through practice - the more you do it the better you get or so says the theory.

Hook:


In most successful songs there is always that element that catches the listeners attention and makes it distinctive and memorable. In 1994 Blues Traveller came up with a song about it:

Hook
It doesn't matter what I say
So long as a sing I with inflection
That makes you think that I'll convey
Some inner truth of vast reflection

(John Popper)

The hook then, needn't be anything deep or meaningful and in most cases the listener isn't even aware of that element that keeps bringing them back to the song. Usually the hook will be part or all of the song title; for example Johny's Cash's Ring of Fire, attracts attention and the hook forms both part of the chorus and the song title.

Finally, making a song is really great fun and I firmly believe anyone can do it, even if you only play a triangle or tap your foot. As the song says, "you've got the music in you". Good luck.

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Comments 19 comments

ralwus 6 years ago

I have some, I did them years ago, but I gave away the guitar after my illness just took the fun away and I don't have the breath to blow my harp anymore. I can't sing anymore either, but I do enjoy music. Good hub Jane. Charlie Make a video, share.


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drbj 6 years ago from south Florida

After this refreshing discourse on songwriting, Jane, I am even more tempted to compose a ditty or two. In the meantime I leave you with this thought. Back when the earth was still cooling, there was a song which began:

"A pretty girl is like a melody ...

The second line was ... "that haunts you night and day." That is exactly what a favorite song does: it haunts you night and day. Thanks for reminding me. :)


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Jane Bovary 6 years ago from The Fatal Shore Author

Charlie, I'm not really a singer...but it doesn't stop me. I'll bet your songs were wonderful. It's a shame you gave your guitar away but then if you hadn't, we mightn't have got the poetry.

I'm working my way up to a video!

Thanks


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Jane Bovary 6 years ago from The Fatal Shore Author

Lol drbj, I know that song. Irving Berlin..now there's a songwriter!

Songs sure do have a way of sticking in your head, sometimes even the ones you don't particularly like. I've had "Shaddap Your Face" in my head for 24 hours.

Thanks for reading


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

Thank you Dear Jane. Beautiful music and guidelines.


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danielgreen 6 years ago

Rockin hub!!!!


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Jane Bovary 6 years ago from The Fatal Shore Author

Thanks very much Micky and Daniel Green


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carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

I didn't know that pearl about the Spartans.. Interesting!!


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Jane Bovary 6 years ago from The Fatal Shore Author

Hi carolina muscle! Yeah, those Spartans were pretty tough. Thanks for the visit.


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Joyus Crynoid 6 years ago from Eden

Well said Jane--I think that about covers it! I agree with you about not trying to target a particular audience. That may be the way to go if you are seeking commercial success, but it seems to me that the best artists always write for themselves--great writers like Bob Dylan and Joni Mitchell. I like the quotes from Orwell (one of my favorite writers) and your reference to The Hook (my favorite Blues Traveller song). Excellent hub!


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Jane Bovary 6 years ago from The Fatal Shore Author

Hey Joyus,

Thanks for that generous comment. It was actually a re-worked essay from last year when I was studying, which is why it's wordy.. I grab anything I can for these hubs!

Cheers


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Manna in the wild 6 years ago from Australia

"“A painter paints pictures on canvas. But musicians paint their pictures on silence.”

Leopold Stokowski" I 'tweeted' this and linked your hub. Thanks for the fun hub.


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Jane Bovary 6 years ago from The Fatal Shore Author

Manna, thanks very much for that. I appreciate the visit.


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

This was very well researched and well written. After the first paragraph I decided to follow you; the care you put into your craft was much in evidence.

I had to laugh reading the "Smells Like Teen Spirit" lyrics. I was just thinking about that song no more than 3 days ago. It's an introductory song -- "here we are now" -- that presented Nirvana to the world. I believe the lyrics you posted are a description of what makes or drives the band: "A mulatto" (Dave Grohl, of mixed Latino blood), "An albino" (the pasty Cobain), "A mosquito" (that tall drummer does look like a mosquito), "My libido" (Cobain's feverish and tragic libido, the driving force behind all of it). I may be totally wrong, but thought it was worth sharing. Thanks.


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De Greek 5 years ago from UK

What a wonderfully clever hub :-)


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Jane Bovary 5 years ago from The Fatal Shore Author

Doug Turner Jr.....finally I can make sense of that song! Thanks! And thankyou too, for forging ahead through that very long hub...;)


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Jane Bovary 5 years ago from The Fatal Shore Author

De Greek..it's great to see you in this neck of the woods. Thanks!


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Mike Marks 5 years ago

When 'hook' was pointed out to me, Zep's Whole Lotta Love was the example. 'Hook' wasn't an idea that was going to hold me to the next bar, it was an anticipated sound, the next sound, that drum I'm waiing for to lead me out of the drum solo to those two power chords I know are coming, then "way down inside" and every phrase of that section, and then that return to the main riff, and so on. Whole Lotta Love is just loaded with hooks I'll hang on for two more seconds of the song just to hear such and such...

...excellent article, well written with pro information delivered from the point of view of someone claiming to be amatuerish while common sensibly knowing what turns her on, siting tech that works and giving credit to mystery that works...

...in my youth I was turned on by composers who had no lyrical hook, often no chorus, guys like ELP, Floyd, Yes, but then again of course I was a Beatle fan from the day they first hit the Sullivan stage when I immediately began my guitar lessons. Consequentially I've written my fair share of chorusless songs, I like them but I don't know if they will be popular, and a few very structured chorusful songs. I've just recently got into webpaging and as soon as I get back to my homestate I intend to make some recordings I can registar with the library of congress so that I can start sharing them online.

Something I love about lyrical-less music, best examples being classical or musicscores, is how we know the story the sound is telling even though there are no words. Makes me consider that a word sounds the way it should to hold its meaning.


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Jane Bovary 5 years ago from The Fatal Shore Author

Hey Mike...yes, Whole Lotta Love is a classic song, and you're right it's 'a bundle of hooks'.

Thankyou for this great comment. I hope to share some recordings online one day too..when/if I come up with something worth sharing. I'm a Beatles fan too and when I started learning some of their songs for the guitar I realised just HOW good they were.

I love lyrics but also agree that some classical, lyricless music can be more eloquent than any wordy song.

Cheers!

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