If You Say We Should Try - SONG

I wrote this song recently and I collaborated with a musician from Finland Kaj Fristyle who wrote the music for it. Please click on the video to listen to him singing this song. It's just a home demo so no special mixing here. LOL.

Lyrics by Maria D’Alessandro ©2012
Music & Vocals Kaj Fristyle ©2012


I got something to say - I don’t wanna hide
Each day I’ve been tryin’ to find words in my mind
But when I see you comin’ –
I feel like runnin’
Coz I just wanna be kind


When I look in your eyes - I remember good times
I wanna tell you I love you and it’s all gonna be fine
But times are different
And I’m losing my pace
I’m heading for that big empty space

CHORUS
If you say we should try
To see the stars in the sky
In the darkness of the night
Then I’ll stay, yes I’ll stay,
I’ll stay and make it right

****INSTRUMENTAL BREAK**********


Let me hold you tight
Let me see you smile
My heart’s beating fast
Like I ran a mile
I want you 24/7
I wanna feel I’m in heaven

CHORUS

BRIDGE
I need you in my life
No matter what comes around
We belong together
In good and stormy weather

****SMALL INSTRUMENTAL BREAK******

CHORUS>


© Copyright Maria D'Alessandro 2012. All Rights Reserved.

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epigramman 4 years ago

...this is a world class presentation of sight, sound and words - or more specifically, lyrics. As mentioned in the previous comment you are a naturally gifted songwriter and it just seems to come easy to you and that is the impression I get when listening to your song of collaboration - the dynamics are all here - lovely melody, heartfelt performance and words of passion.

lake erie time 9:57am

one more for our music group.


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scrittobene 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia Author

I'm reading your comments Colin just as it's ticking over to the midnight hour. There's something magical about that. Many thanks my beloved friend.


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beardsiolli 4 years ago

Very good Maria. Kaj has given it a Neil Young like feel, which always works for me.


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Sweet song, sweet lyrics, you are a talent extrodinaire!!

very nice, both songand singer. Bravo.


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MartieCoetser 4 years ago from South Africa

Beautiful and brilliant!


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MartieCoetser 4 years ago from South Africa

Beautiful and brilliant!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Another great song. Love the lyrics.


oceansider 4 years ago

I have to say I loved your lyrics and your friend's music and vocals....the song is so lovely, so pleasant to listen to.

I have voted this blog up and beautiful! I wish you the best with your new song!

Helen

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