BABY TEETH BLUES

When I was just a baby I had a toothless grin I drank my milk and ate my food

A tiny tooth grew in First 1, then 2, then 3 and 4

My smile was quite a sight My baby teeth were growing in

I could grin and snap and bite.

More teeth grew in pretty soon My mouth was full, you see.

Mom wanted me to brush them Not once a day - but three!

One day when I was brushing I gave out such a shout!

My baby teeth were wiggling And started falling out!

My Daddy called me "Snaggle Tooth" He thought that was so funny.

Call me anything you please Long as the Tooth Fairy brings me money

My Grandpa came to visit And a surprise he showed to me

He took his teeth out of his head,

Held them up for me to see "I hear you don't like brushing

Before you go to sleep.

You don't have to brush them all you know

...Brush just the ones you want to keep!"

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kysnoopyq42 7 years ago from no where

How funny.


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AEvans 7 years ago from SomeWhere Out There

How adorably funny and here is a little advise don't forget to add pics to your hubs google loves those too! Great first hub keep them coming. :)


Crazdwriter 7 years ago

that is too cute and totally funny. Great first hub!


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AEvans 7 years ago from SomeWhere Out There

I had to read it again, to funny!!! :D


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BEAUTYBABE 7 years ago from QUEENSLAND AUSTRALIA.

I loved this poem M.

It catches the eye because it is very funny.

I have tried my hand at poetry for the first time, so pop over to Beautybabe, and please feel free to check out one, two or all of mine.


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SandyMcCollum 7 years ago

Welcome, MoneyLady! I liked your poem, I remember when my teeth began falling out, what a fun memory. I look forward to reading more of your work. :) I have a couple of poetry pages, too. I like to write ones that rhyme, but my best ones don't rhyme.


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Property-Invest 6 years ago from London

Cute and really funny. I'm so glad Hubpages is going so well for you!


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must65gt 6 years ago

that was funny Thanks for the smiles


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Moneylady 6 years ago from Texas Author

Glad you liked it must65gt .... thx


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nighthag 6 years ago from Australia

I really enjoyed that! you have a great gift for words

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