Poems for Chelsea

by Sydney U.

I am a RealHousewife. I have three real children. Sydney is my middle child. She is eleven and she wants to be a writer some day.

I am a huge fan of sueroy333. Her daughter, Chelsea, is also a writer. Chelsea had an assigment and she posted it online. Chelsea wrote about tornadoes. Sydney is very interested in tornadoes and she was excited by Chelsea's writing. She wanted to introduce herself to Chelsea and share her poems that she has just written for a homework assignment.

So, I'm turning it over to Sydney today so that she and Chelsea can learn from each other. I hope that you enjoy their homework as much as we did!

Hi Chelsea, my name is Sydney and I am 11 years old. I am in 5th grade. I thought your tornado interview was funny and now I am your new fan! I had an assignment at school and I had to write 5 poems. One of each kind of poem. I hope you like my poems as much as I liked your interview. It was great! I laughed a lot!

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Haiku

On a chilly night

People make some apple pies

Smell that awesome smell.

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Limerick

There once was a talking pair of shorts

They liked to go snort, snort

Some were green but some were red

Most liked to sleep in bed with old brother ned

Then one day, they said, "Lets go vandalize the court!"

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                                                Diamante

                                                   Pepper

                                               Small, grains

                                 Sprinkling, topping, seasoning

                                      It can make you sneeze

                                      Spicy, eating, dissolving

                                              White, Puny

                                                    Salt

*****

5 Senses Poem

Carnival

I smell.....carmel popcorn.

I taste.....blue or pink cotton candy.

I hear.....chldren playing games

I feel......cold air on my face on rides.

I see......people laughing and having fun.

*****

Cinquain

Ice Cream

Cold, Creamy

Tasting, Enjoying, Chewing

They give you brainfreezes

Milkshake!

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Austinstar 5 years ago from Somewhere in the universe

Well, I have to say that's one of the best haikus I've ever read!

I didn't get the Limerick - I'm a dummy.

The Diamante was excellent. I love that it started with pepper and ended with salt.

The 5 senses poem had me drooling for cotton candy! and a carnival. Good imagery.

The Cinquain was a delight for my appetite! I don't usually like ice cream, but weirdly enough, I do love a good brain freeze.

Poetry is one of my specialties, so I can critique with meaning. You did good, kid.


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mojefballa 5 years ago from Nigeria

Wow,quite an interesting poem you actually shared in here.I love it and really enjoyed it because am a core Chelsea fans and am sure this will be loved by all Chelsea fans.


Motown2Chitown 5 years ago

How awesome is SHE? Make sure Sydney keeps writing! And, thanks for sharing her with us. Show her this comment, please:

Sydney - YOU ROCK - and your poetry is awesome. I can't write good poetry EVER. I'm going to take a lesson or two from you, okay?


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Hi Sydney Great job!!!!


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Thank you everybody!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for all the kind comments!!!!! I hope I can be as good As writers as you guys are!

- Love, Sydney


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

All you writers: I let Sydney read your comments while she ate her breakfast. She looked at me when she was finished and her smile was huge! She said, "I like these people!"

Thank you everybody - this has made her homework fun for us! You guys are awesome!

Love - Mom


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Austinstar 5 years ago from Somewhere in the universe

She certainly has potential! If she wants to be a writer, poetry is a great place to start. It makes you think.

Warning! Poetry does NOT sell well! Poetry is very personal and it's main intention is to provoke imagery. For this reason, it teaches us to "feel" the words.

Also, writers Write. So write often and then even more often!


Motown2Chitown 5 years ago

Very true, Austin! But poets deserve the respect for being able to so concisely provoke imagery! I second the write a lot, and then write some more, though!


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Austinstar - Oh she's in to it too:). She has written many short stories (that actually have a plot! She adored your comments! I am so glad Chelsea and Sueroy started this project.

I also have to tell you, Syd is the quiet child. I think she found a way to express herself and it makes her feel happy. I love that!


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

I agree MO! I think the trick is you have to be smart. The smart poets can use those words to play tricks with your head. Like Austin said - writing poetry does make you think! I have trouble just doing that part some days! Lol!


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Austinstar 5 years ago from Somewhere in the universe

Yep, gotta love that! Being able to express yourself is awesome. Some people have to hold it inside. Makes them explode and that's a big mess to clean.


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Another good point! And I bet that is true too, REALLY! If I didn't write - daily, I would explode too because my head would be so fat from not purging it!

I'm going to school and I'm very excited because I have a new mission. I am helping a friend and I am doing some gritty research:). Fun!!


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sueroy333 5 years ago from Indiana

I loved your poems! Especially the limerick. It was so funny! I loved the randomness of the last line! I hope you keep writing great poems,

Chelsea : )


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sueroy333 5 years ago from Indiana

Sydney- What a talented kid you are!

Thank you so much for sharing your poems with us.

My favorite was the Diamante!

I'm terrible at poetry and have a great respect for anyone who can do it... esp. do it well. And you, my dear, do it well!! Awesome!!

If you guys lived closer, I know you and Chelsea would be great friends!


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sueroy333 5 years ago from Indiana

I forgot to mention that your mom told me you had already turned in your homework... that means you memorized these poems. That takes some wicked awesome brainpower! Totally impressive!!!


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barbergirl28 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca

You have definately got a writer on your hands. I remember doing poetry like that when I was younger. It was always a special treat to do something a little different. She has got talent; She has got wit; she has got a way with words! With that she will go far.

Keep up the good work Sydney - My favorite was the dynamite. I love how it looks! I might have to do some of those! :)


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Haha! You guys she is going to love reading all your comments when she gets home from school. Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement! It is exciting for a mother too:)!


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The Frog Prince 5 years ago from Arlington, TX

Talent in the making.

The Frog


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Thank you everybody! I hope I will have a hub page some day like all of you. I am proud of you hub people too and I am looking up to you. My mom lets me read some of your hubs. I like them a lot.

Chelsea - I am so happy you read my poems. I think you and your mom are so funny! There was a tornado here and I was scared. I like them, I just don't want to be in one at all. I liked your videos. You are cool. Way cool.

Thank you for making my homework more fun! I hope to talk to you soon!

Sydney


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Cogerson 5 years ago from Virginia

A very nice and quick hub...voted up


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Why thank you Cogerson - you like the quick ones huh? Lol! Thanks so much for reading and commenting as always!


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Truckstop Sally 5 years ago

Homework should be fun! Writing should be fun! Way to go! Has your teacher talked about Bio-Poems? It is 8 or 9 lines using different parts of speech to brainstorm a variety of thoughts about likes, traits, fears, etc.


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

I don't know if my teacher has talked about bio-poems, but I don't think so. I wrote more poems. This sounds like it would be a fun one to write!:) I'll try to find out more about those.

- you sound like a cool person! It means a lot to me that all of you guys read my poems!!!!!

Now I know why my mom likes having a hub account!!!!!!! Thank you Truckstop Sally!!!!!


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

And I want to thank you Sally! You have just sent Syney to bed with a smile on her face and some poem thoughts to fall asleep and dream about!

This has been a very cool experience for her - thank you so very much! I told her about you - that is what she meant by the "cool person!" she really loved learning about your teaching and wants me to let her read your hubs now too! I don't know why I didn't think of that myself! Gosh! (The above was written by Syd - and this one by Kelly;)


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prasetio30 5 years ago from malang-indonesia

Nice tribute to Chelsea. I believe she is very talented girl. Thanks for share with us. Rated up. Take care!

Prasetio


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Hi Prasetio! Thank you so much for your kind comments!! I will let Sydney read them when she gets home from school! It was the first thing she looked at when she woke up today:). Like I said, she is a lot like her momma! Very curious about everything!


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

Hey Sydney!

Nice job hun ~ the heck with the rest of your school classes, just keep writing!

Well, I don't really mean that. But do continue to use your creativity in all you do. It is a wonderful gift!

I'd like to see a poem with say 2 lines that you start and then ask your Mom to write 2 lines after that ~ and then you write another 2 lines and so on and keep building on each others writing. I bet you girls come up with something awesome!

Good luck Sydney! (and u2 Kel)

Sharyn


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Oh Sharyn you are a genius! Thank you so much for your awesome idea (and always - comments:). That is sweet! I bet she will want to try it!!

Thank you - thank you - thank you!!


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Thank you Sharyn!!!!! I will try writing one of those in my notebook! Thank you for reading my poems!!!!!!

- Sydney:-)


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

Great Sydney! I'm curious to see what you come up with! Write a couple lines, possibly rhyming (but not necessary) ~ then give it to your Mom and don't say anything, just let her build on it with two more lines. Then she'll give it back to you without giving suggestions and let you build on what she wrote, and so on.

Here's a few ideas to start with but please don't use them if you don't like them. It's just to get you thinking :)

It's not that easy being the middle child

Some people might think I'm a little wild

or

My Mom is a real housewife

This is her purpose in life (sry Kel)

or

I really don't want to learn today

I want to go outside and play

Good Luck ~ Have Fun Syd!

Sharyn


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Austinstar 5 years ago from Somewhere in the universe

Heck, they might build a whole book of poetry that way! Good idea, Sharyn


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Isn't it! I love it! We are going to do it! Syd went to tumbling practice with Maddy - guess what? She just called - Dave is going to get them early, Maddy has vasovagal syndrome - which is a fancy way of saying, she passes out for no apparent reason, and she is super dizzy and feels like she is going to pass out. You two!

And look at you - in the hospital and still working!


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bestreviews 5 years ago from Sunny Greece

Wow - You know they say each new generation comes to replace the old ones.. and now I am off to go and sulk in the corner because I suck so much at writing!! =P Tell them to keep up the good work, two thumbs up for both!


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

How can a Best review suck? Don't sulk in the corner, just sit in a comfy chair and write another hub!

Thank you for your kins comments as always:)


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Austinstar 5 years ago from Somewhere in the universe

Vaso Vagal syndrome. Sounds like low blood sugar to me, but how can she have that when she has such a sweet mom?


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

That's what I wondered:). Ha! Funny you say that - I spoke to my step dad today and I explained to him that each time this happens, I notice her cheeks get bright red and he shouted out, "she's getting dehydrated!" oh he's an anesthesiologist. I've had every kind of test you can imagine - MRI' extensive hearing tests, eeg's, blood work - no one seems to have a good answer. I asked if we could test her sugar but I guess it would have to be the moment it is occurring?

Mad Dog almost went to the hospital herself today! They finally got a day to play outside and she fell on the concrete and cracked her chin open! I put a butterfly on it - so we've been watching kid movies today:). Little Monsters is on now but I've seen it:)


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Austinstar 5 years ago from Somewhere in the universe

Oh please, I wouldn't even give 10 cc's of blood just for cracking a chin open. Apparently you see "Little Monsters" every day! How old is Mad Dog? Give her a cookie for me.

You can buy glucometers really cheaply these days and test Sydney's sugar as she is having an 'attack'. It's the only way to do it. At her age, I would get her started on yoga which fixes a whole lot of physical problems. Too late for me, I'm too old to do the downward dog. Hell, I AM the downward dog!


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Mad Dog is all of 9! I do see little monsters and I mean every day. All the kids hang out here, I don't think any of the others moms will let them In:) lol!

Glucometer! Thats it! Yeah, I'm going to. There's a wlagreens on every corner. Thanks! I should do yoga! I'll have to get a video for them - that would be really good for them! You are a genius!

Oh the dogs barked twice today! I got a package - it is cafe press but not the big picture:). I love it! The girls want one of your shirts, it just wouldn't be right for them to wear Stan's around! Lol!


Motown2Chitown 5 years ago

Real, before you spend money on one, check and see what strips your insurance covers...then request a free monitor through your insurance company. Abbot gives a free Freestyle Lite starter kit. :) AccuChek is covered by Blue Cross generally, and they give you a number to call to request a free starter kit as well. Save the money if you can!


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Thanks MO! Ill five it a try - yea I have the kind of insurance that doesn't pay for anything. Private policies are not so great. An MRI is $2500, I just paid for one. Hearing testing and eeg's, allergy tests, gosh! I appreciate that.

Austinstar - it is Vaso Vagal then? I had someone correct me regarding that so of course I thought I was wrong! Smokey And The Bandit! Yeah! I was jealous of Sally Fields!


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Austinstar 5 years ago from Somewhere in the universe

I was just telling Mo to get a blood type then google "Eat Right For Your Type" and "Group O food list" or A, B, AB

Seriously, My blood work has done a 180 since I started this diet, which is why my blood sugar went down! My blood sugar went down to NORMAL! which I am not used to. That's why I nearly blacked out.

Ok, I need to do my next hub on this! Here I go....


Motown2Chitown 5 years ago

Egads, Real! In that case, Google Abbott Laboratories and see about getting a Freestyle Lite starter kit from them. The strips are what are really expensive, but if you're not testing too often, it can be affordable. :)


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Thanks to both of you! I have Aetna - Dave calls it shitna:). Lol!

I am checking that out now Austinstar! That sounds interesting and I have not heard of that. Sydney is a little over weight so we do watch the high caloric/fatty foods to avoid them. I'm really serious about that.

Austinstar - I had an idea for a hub for you! You'd just be the perfect person to explain this one! Why do Indians lack the enzyme that breaks down alcohol? Of course I'm weird so it may not be interesting to every one:)


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Austinstar 5 years ago from Somewhere in the universe

Us Injuns do not do well with 'hic' booze. It's genetic. We haven't evolved enough or mixed with those that have.


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Those genetic codes! I heard that that is why the Indians lost all their land - they didn't have an honest bar tender:)

Now alcohol is not good for your sugar levels! You already know that too!

I can't wait to see the hub. I'm researching some stuff right now. We have moved onto G Force now. Thank gosh for lap tops:)


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gr82bme 5 years ago from USA

Fantastic. Keep writing. I can not write like that


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

gr82bme - thank you so much! With an awesome profile name like that I don't believe you!

Im going to check out your hubs and be jealous I bet:)!


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Wayne Brown 5 years ago from Texas

Well, there ya go, even 5th graders like Sydney know more of the technical aspects of poetry than I do. I am just a humble lemonade stand poet! LOL! You go Sydney! WB


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Austinstar 5 years ago from Somewhere in the universe

Technical, Schmechnical - Poetry is supposed to break the rules!

It's also fine to follow the rules and you did, Syd.


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AngRose 5 years ago

Awesome job Sydney! Keep up the great work, and don't let anybody stop you from doing poetry "your" way. Like Austin said, poetry is supposed to break the rules sometimes! Of course, NOT when it's a homework assignment, then you HAVE to follow the rules. But when you're doing it for fun, use that awesome brain and creativity you have inside you! :)


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Thank you everybody!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for the coments. And thank you to Austinstar and Wayne Brown!!!!!!!!!!! And thank you gr8tobme and AngRose!!!!!!!!!!! I appreciate it!!


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katrinasui 5 years ago

Well done! lovely poem. keep writing.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean

Very cool Sydney. I was about your age when I started writing; just don't stop.


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ClaraN9 5 years ago from United Kingdom

These are awesome poems from someone so young. i wish I could have written as well as you when I was your age. I have only just started writing poetry and you have inspired me to keep going. Well done and thanks Sydney and you are lucky to have such a great Mom.


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vocalcoach 5 years ago from Nashville Tn.

Wow! She is so talented. A great, young lady that will rock hubpages when she gets a little older. Thank you for sharing such talent. Way to go! :)vocalcoach


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Thank you everybody!!!!!!!!!!!! Once again I thank you for writing comments to me. And I just got my grades today on this assignment, and I got 6 A's and 1 B-! So special thanks to Vocalcoach, ClaraN9, Randy Behavior, and katrinasui!!!!!!!!!!!

- Sydney


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Spirit Whisperer 5 years ago from Isle of Man

She is a chip off the old block. Very talented indeed and she should get A+ for this assignment.


lori kay 5 years ago

i liked your poems Sydney. You are good. You are taking after your mother. I suspect you may have an Aunt that is good at poetry, eh? well maybe not. What about an Uncle? At any rate.. I am proud of you and your writing. keep up the excellent work. Your grades are GREAT!


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kingphilipIV 5 years ago from Iloilo, Philippines

Absolutely great! I can't write poems as beautiful as this.. You surely have the skills and talent in writing poems..


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Hi King - I dont have this kind of talent either! My 11 year old daughter wrote all of these for her friend who also loves writing:). I'll let her know you have admired them - it will make her day! Thank you!


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

Wow! You have composted poems in different patters, and each one is unique.


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RealHousewife 4 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Hi Vinaya - thank you - my daughter wrote all of these - I do think she is quite talented myself! ha!


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Ardie 4 years ago from Neverland

Aaw she is such a little talent RHW! I bet your daughter got an excellent grade on the poems she wrote. So cute and Im sharing


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RealHousewife 4 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Hi Ardie! I am so glad you reminded me of this one! Syd is really talented...she always says she wants to be a writer. Oh - the diary excerpts are hers as well. I think she showed talent even then! HAHA!

I love this page:)


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Ardie 4 years ago from Neverland

OH! I remember the diary excerpts - I laughed SO hard I cried.


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RealHousewife 4 years ago from St. Louis, MO Author

Me too Ardie- I was laughing so hard...I had NO idea what was going on in her little head

Nick who lives down the street might be appalled to know she told everyone he wears girl underwear:). Hahaha!

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