This family of mine (Poem)

The very second marked in time

I saw his ever so tiny face

There was absolutely no doubt

It was by God’s holy grace


My lovely wife, ever so happy

All was going to be so fine

That God had generously granted

This precious little family of mine



Three years or so later

God’s grace again found way

Another handsome son was given

So precious there he lay



My wife proudly held him up

Both glowing in a ray of shine

God had granted yet another one

To this growing little family of mine



Then came my beautiful daughter

A few more years down the road

My beautiful wife so proudly held her up

They both so brightly ever glowed


I sat there in sheer wonderment

Could this life be more fine?

Thinking how God had granted me

This wonderful little family of mine



Ever so happy though we were

God’s grace was not yet through

This time God granted us not one

Wow! This time he gave us two!



A precious boy and girl to take home

Both oh so ever sweet, ever so devine

God had so generously granted me

This amazing little family of mine



A dozen years have come and gone

And I remember the past to when

My oldest boys were ever so little

Now they have become grown men



My darling little middle child

Certainly no longer a baby

Has blossomed and quickly flourished

Into one beautiful little lady




As parents we still cling dearly

On to our youngest little two

So quickly they do grow right up

Right there in front of you



No way could I create this life

Any better of my own design

Only God could have given me

This family of mine...


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

Oh my! This is great stuff. Up and awesome, Chris!

I'm linking it to Facebook.


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Old Poolman 5 years ago from Rural Arizona

Chris, WillStarr is right, this is great stuff. Way to go my friend.


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drbj 5 years ago from south Florida

So tender, so beautiful, Chris. Here's to you and your family. You and they are very fortunate.


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Becky Katz 5 years ago from Hereford, AZ

A totally beautiful ode to your family.


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TheManWithNoPants 5 years ago from Tucson, Az.

We should ALL write one of these. I write about politics and farts, and leave out my greatest blessings.

Touching and well done my friend. Gimme more!

jim


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CMerritt 5 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

Thank all of you guys for your nice comments.


Sunnie Day 5 years ago

You are truly a blessed man and I know you know this. This was such a hub written from the heart..God bless your beautiful family..May all your days be rich in Gods love,

Sunnie


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CMerritt 5 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

You know Sunnie, I REALLY AM! I love my family so much, what more can a guy ask for?

Thank you for being you, Sunnie.

:)


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

What a wonderful tribute to family Chris. Voting up all the way!


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CMerritt 5 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

Thanks Cardisa...this poetry stuff really brings out the 'softy' in me.....before I came to hubpages, I never dreamed I would do any poetry. Then after reading some others on here....BANG...I get this emotional stuff in me coming out.......not sure what the heck is going on...lol

I appreciate your votes...


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

A wonder poem for your family, such wonderful thoughts and wonderful words.

So pleased to hear that it is the inspiration from hubpages that you are writing such beautiful 'softy' poems


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Maggie-May 5 years ago from the Island of Cape Breton to the Eastern Shores near Halifax, NS

Good morning Chris--your hub is the first I read today---What a wonderful treat!!! I love men that express themselves, and it's always been a wonder of mine to know the thoughts of these miracles that happen--lovely poetry here because your thoughts are beautiful...Thanks for making my first cup of coffee super enjoyable!!! HUGS to you and wife and family!!!


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breakfastpop 5 years ago

So beautiful! Up and awesome,


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lucybell21 5 years ago from Troy, N.Y.

I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was beautiful!


Sueswan 5 years ago

Beautiful and heartfelt.

Voted up, up and away!


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Dexter Yarbrough 5 years ago from United States

Hi CMerritt! Beautiful, man! Absolutely beautiful! Voted up, up and away!


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CMerritt 5 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

Rosemary,

Yeah, I am beoming an ol softy....but I really do love these hubpages and the people. So many of you inspire in so many ways...it makes it easy to write sometimes.

thank you for reading and commenting.

Chris


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CMerritt 5 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

Hi Maggie, it is a treat for me to see you visit me. I could not have done such a thing, and show these type of emotions a year ago. It has been such a fantastic experience to even TRY to write a poem as such.

I am happy I was able to kick off your morning coffee with a treat.

Hug right back at you!

Chris


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CMerritt 5 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

Breakfast Pop, lucibell, Sueswan,Dexter, I apreciate all of you for your very kind comments and for taking the time to stop by and read my little poem.

It means a lot too me.

Chris


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epigramman 5 years ago

....a really great hall of fame line - "Only God could have given me this family of mine'

...and so very worthy of a proud and joyous posting to my Facebook page with a direct link back here - this is your masterwork, I believe, as the fine poet that you've become. And I am still laughing, believe me, at your comment to me about spewing Mountain Dew through your nose - someone else made a similar comment on the same page - it just goes to show you that great minds really do think alike.

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CMerritt 5 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

Thank you Epi, I appreciate YOU so much. You are a pleasure to follow, and I thank you for your always uplifting and kind remarks.


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feenix 5 years ago

Hello, CM,

This is a lovely, heart-warming tribute to your family and demonstration of gratitude to God.

I loved reading this piece and I admire and respect you very much for being such a loving and devoted father and husband.


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CMerritt 5 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

Thanks feenix, I really appreciate those kind words. I DO love my family....I am very blessed.


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MsDora 5 years ago from The Caribbean

I admire your focus: that is, that your wonderful family is a gift from God. No better subject matter for poetry. Thank you for sharing.


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CMerritt 5 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

MsDora, I appreciate you visiting and commenting.

:)


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Wayne Brown 5 years ago from Texas

Nice work, Chris...your family will certainly be proud of this tribute in verse...look at you go! WB


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CMerritt 5 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

Thank you Wayne, I appeciate you and your comments.


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justateacher 5 years ago from Somewhere Over The Rainbow - Near Oz...

Awesome tribute to your family. We all need to remember how blessed we all really are. No matter how bad we think we might have it, there is always someone who is worse than we do.


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CMerritt 5 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

You are absolutly right justateacher....and this is the perfect time of year to reflect on that....

Thank you for your kind words about my poem and my family.

Chris


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b. Malin 4 years ago

What a Beautiful, Heartfelt Poem and Ode, to your Lovely Family, CMerritt. Your words ring Loud and Clear, they are that of a very Proud Father and Husband. Yes, you are Truly Blessed my Friend.


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

Thanks b. Malin!...I truly am very blessed....and I appreciate your very kind words.

Chris


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thelyricwriter 4 years ago from West Virginia

Up, awesome, and beautiful votes Chris. Such a wonderful poem that hits the heart. Many of us don't realize how lucky we are to be blessed with family. It is obvious that you do. Glad you are happy my friend. Your the example of what family should be.


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

thelyricwriter,

Thank you so much for the kind remarks. I am very blessed with a wonderful family.

Chris


femmeflashpoint 4 years ago

Chris,

Christmas is nearly here. Hope you've got a really big mantle at your place 'cause it must surely be crammed with lots of stockings.

This was a wonderful read. Happy I didn't see it until now. Timing is everything, lol!

Happy Christmas to you and yours!

femme


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

femmeflash

YES, my wife has SEVEN HUGE STOCKINGS on our mantle all ready for Sain Nick... :)

lol

Thank you, I really do appreciate your words....and very Merry Christmas to YOU!

Chris


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

what a nice way to share the story of your family!


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

Thank YOU PDX, your words are very much appreciated.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

no problem, my friend


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

MERRY CHRISTMAS!


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PurvisBobbi44 4 years ago from Florida

CMerritt,

That was so beautiful, and what a lovely family you must have, and the best of all is that you as a husband and father know it, and said it so eloquently. I feel blessed that you have shared it with us. That was a true Love Letter to your family.

Thanks,

Bobbi


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

Thanks Bobbi,

Your kind words are very much appreciated.

Chris


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Chris I have just come over here after reading your coomment on my hub today.

I don't know how you can say that you are not a poet I do not know.

Yur work is great and I am not the only hubber who thinks this.

As I am writing this I am slowly realisisng who else puts herself down also : Yes you've got it ; ME !!!

I suppose we should practice what we preach at times.

Ha ha ha !!!

However this poem I vote up up and away and here's to so many more to share on here.

Take care and enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

I know Eddy, I am my worst critic. I don't really put in any structure to my poems....I just write what comes to mind and blah..there it is.

I am still such a rookie and writing. But it is people like you who inspire me to do better.

Thank you so very much for your kind words.

Chris


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

A beautiful poem it is Chris , I even now understand what you saw m,ore clearly , and I love it . I t's a great start and I will continue reading , thanks for sharing and I look forward.

Blessing to you and your family.


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

Thank you sky!

:)


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Rhonda Waits 4 years ago from The Emerald Coast

A trully beautiful poem, voted up and awesome.

Sweet wishes Rhonda


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

Thank you Rhonda,

Sweet wishes to you!

Chris


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KDee411 4 years ago from Bay Area, California

Beautiful, what a good husband and father you are.

Kay


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

Thanks KDee, it is easy being a good husband and father with the wife and kids I am blessed with.


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KDee411 4 years ago from Bay Area, California

I wish more men felt that way.

KD


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

Thank you KD, for those very kind words.

Chris


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

Merrit, it's the life of a good writer to be your own worst critic. It's the nature of the beast for sure!


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

PDXKaraokeGuy,

I know I have a hard time thinking that some of my ramblings are worthy of being even mentioned among so many of the REAL writers on these Hubpages.

I appreciate your encouragement though.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

no problem, merritt. And real writing comes from the heart. if that's where you're writing from, then consider yourself worthy!


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DropsOfRain 4 years ago

very beautiful and sweet!

It seems like this poem came from deep down true feeling and thats what makes it great!


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

DropsOfRain....Thank you very much for your kind words.


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

Beautiful piece of writing.


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

thank you Vinaya, I appreciate it.


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CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

This is a wonderful hub on family and what matters. Happy to have landed here on this rainy Sunday afternoon, just when I needed a quick pick me up read.

Voted up, beautiful and will certainly share.


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

CrisSp

You made my day,

:)

Chris


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Pamela-anne 3 years ago from Kitchener, Ontario

Wow Chris this is so well written and coming purely from the heart; you are indeed a blessed man of God. Take care and God bless you and your lovely family.


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CMerritt 3 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana Author

Thanks Pam!

:)

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