my trust in you are dying

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   PTAYLOR9366posted 15 years ago

   my trust in you are dying
   i told you many of time
   if i found out you lied to me
   i am going to pull back from you
   i told you
   it only take one time
   to lie to me
   my trust in you are dying
   i told you lying and respect
   goes together with me
   i love you
   i do almost anything for you
   i depend on you
   why you have to lie
   to me
   now
   my trust in you are dying

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   SweetiePieposted 15 years ago

   You should publish your poetry as hubs.  In the forum you are not getting any traffic for this towards you hubscore.

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   PTAYLOR9366posted 15 years ago

   how can i do that.because i being trying to

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      countrywomenposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      Welcome to hubpages and happy hubbing
      Most of the questions would be answered in this FAQ: http://hubpages.com/faq/

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   Marisa Wrightposted 15 years ago

   When you sign in to HubPages, on the first page you'll see a big red arrow saying "start a new Hub".  You'll find the same red arrow on your "My Account" page or your "My Profile" page.  Click on that and follow the instructions, and you'll find you've made a Hub.

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   PTAYLOR9366posted 15 years ago

   thank u

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      sukkranposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      come on ptaylor 9366, we expecting more hubs from you and i hope you will be one of our best hubbers around. take this from me: i am your first member of your fan club! advance greetings for your lovely poetry hubs.
      sukkran

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   EspianScrollsposted 15 years ago

   Hey I write Poetry. I was hoping you guys might check it out and let me know how I can improve.

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   Sufidreamerposted 15 years ago

   Hi Patricia
   
   Left a comment on your Hub with a few tips about getting your poetry up there - hope it helps

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   aveshposted 15 years ago

   hey nice poem
   check mine poems in 
   http://hubpages.com/hub/poet_in_love
   all comments are welcome

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   panah100posted 15 years ago

   Nice Poem. Keep up with the good work. You are obviously talented.

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    PTAYLOR9366posted 15 years ago

    thank you

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    hsofyanposted 15 years ago

    I also have the same problem, failed entry poem / poetry. But I want to try again. Hopefully there is way out. Regards.

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