A diferent game / Activity -- A Tip on other peoples hubs

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   freecampingaussieposted 12 years ago

   We enjoy reccommend another hubbers hub, however how about a friendly tip ,advice  for the persons hub above you .
   
   For example    http://jlynnfowler.hubpages.com/hub/Inc … n-Children
   
   by Jlynnfowler a new hubber, I enjoyed reading your hub, however it would be great to have some photos included to enhance the hub.
   
   

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   melbelposted 12 years ago

   Okay, this sounds fun. I'm going to check out your lowest scored hub since it'll probably be difficult for me to find something wrong with your highest scoring one.
   
   First off, for some reason, your ads aren't showing on your hubs, just something I noticed aside from critiquing your hubs.
   
   Okay your hub: http://freecampingaussie.hubpages.com/h … ne-to-Join
   
   It appears to be kind of short. I don't know anything about travel clubs. Perhaps give some benefits to joining a travel club and what makes up a "good" travel club. What are some things that make up a bad one? How do travel clubs save people money? Do they cost money to join?

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      annmackiemillerposted 12 years agoin reply to this

      can I add in something? - it reads 'It is $9995 for a family lifetime membership with aprox $8500 worth of benefits for you to enjoy!'  is that right?  are you paying out more than the value of the benefits you enjoy?  Just wondering.

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         freecampingaussieposted 12 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks for tips, You will recieve $8,500 worth of benefits as well as saving up to $1000 a time on resort stays , cruises + discounts on car hire etc so over a lifetime you could save over $100,000 as a family or more

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   annmackiemillerposted 12 years ago

   @ Melbel - well it doesn't look to me as if you need any help from someone like me but I'm game... :0)
   
   http://melbel.hubpages.com/hub/-How-to- … d-Research
   
   I picked that one just cos it was your lowest rating.
   As a personal observation only - for someone like myself who needs help in this direction - I thought it was a bit too technical and a tad confusing. Maybe you need to separate what is a niche from the keyword search - I assume most searchers for this title would be like me - pig ignorant and need it spelt out in plain language.  but that is only my own very personal opinion. For folks with a bit of know-how it is excellent.
   Annie

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      classicalgeekposted 12 years agoin reply to this

      I did the lowest-rated one of yours:
      http://annmackiemiller.hubpages.com/hub … piced-Buns
      
      I liked it but I would add several things:
      1) how does the lack of sugar affect the baking? Why don't these buns have baking powder?
      2) About the sultanas: if all you have is dried-out sultanas, mentioning macerating might help.
      3) Suggestions for alternate spices if you don't have what the recipe recommends.
      
      HTH!

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         annmackiemillerposted 12 years agoin reply to this

         thanks these are great pointers.

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   freecampingaussieposted 12 years ago

   I enjoyed looking at your hubs Classicalgeek
   
   http://classicalgeek.hubpages.com/hub/h … -tea-maker 
   
   With this one I thought it might add to it if you had photos of you making the tea - add to an already good hub !

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