Newbie Needs Help: Hub "Needs Revision"

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   Jean Rogersposted 11 years ago

   Hello and thanks in advance for looking over my hub. This hub has been published for about 2 weeks and recently it says it "Needs Revision" based on deceptive tags, title or category. I revised and edited it thinking that it was ok and resubmitted it, but I am back to the Needs Revision status again. I don't think the title is misleading, so I would love some honest feedback on what needs fixing. Maybe I am just not seeing it because I wrote it and it makes sense to me. Thanks so much!
   
   http://jeanrogers.hubpages.com/_n0zpn4i … s-and-Uses

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   Dame Scribeposted 11 years ago

   Welcome to HubPages, Jean Rogers we are unable to view the Hub due to it being unpublished and unavailable for public display.

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      Jean Rogersposted 11 years agoin reply to this

      I just realized that would probably be the case. (Insert smiley face with hand hitting the forehead). Thanks anyways!

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         Bedbugabscondposted 11 years agoin reply to this

         I am sorry we could not be more helpful. The best I can do is offer this link from hubpages.
         
         http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/Mode … r-Category
         
         I had an issue in this category and it was my tags. Make sure your not keyword stuffing the tags by accident.

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            Jean Rogersposted 11 years agoin reply to this

            Thanks! I will check that out.

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   MelissaBarrettposted 11 years ago

   I looked at it and honestly I didn't see anything at all wrong with the hub. The hub was actually fairly well-written and informative.
   
   The only thing that I can see it flagged for is being part of an over-saturated category.  It's a good hub but it's not the required "exceptional" needed for weight-loss articles.
   
   It may be what category it's listed under as well... you have it in the category of protein in food when it's about supplements.

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      Jean Rogersposted 11 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for the insight and for reading over my article. I still don't know all the categories off hand, so I am going to look into a different category like you suggested. Do you know if it is okay to contact HubPages to ask for specifics? If I at least knew if it was the tags, category, or article in general it would be much easier to fix, and I really want to learn how to write well for HubPages. Thanks for your help!

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   tamronposted 11 years ago

   I read in the learning center about overly saturate subject and this was at the top of the list "weight-loss articles" Don't mention weight loss in your title.
   
   MelissaBarrett
   
   I don't know how she found your article but she is a 100% correct.

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      MelissaBarrettposted 11 years agoin reply to this

      Usually you can type the url into google search and on the right side of the search results you can see a cached version. 

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   Jean Rogersposted 11 years ago

   Thanks everyone! I changed the category, tweaked the tags and edited the article a little. It was submitted for publication and accepted. I appreciate all the suggestions and help.

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