Feedback On My First Hub

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   Poppingposted 11 years ago

   Hi fellow Hubbers.
   
   Recently, I made my first Hub about a simple life advice and would like some feedback.
   
   http://popping.hubpages.com/hub/A-Few-W … ney-Online
   
   (disregard the url name, I didn't know how to change it. I changed my mind on writing that)

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      IzzyMposted 11 years agoin reply to this

      167 words is not a hub. It is far too short.
      
      Plus what is the point you are trying to make?
      
      Bad things don't last forever? Tell that to the parents of the kids shot dead in Connecticut!
      
      Who is going to type in 'simple advice for anyone' into Google search? I see no point in your photo either. Is it yours?
      
      If I were you, I would unpublish and go back to the drawing board.
      
      BTW, welcome to Hubpages

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   janesixposted 11 years ago

   It might be a bit too short. try to expand on it.

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   btulloh098posted 11 years ago

   I've discovered that once you put in the url name/title, you cannot change it unfortunately.  You could delete the article and re-submit it though.

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   Sushma Webberposted 11 years ago

   Hi Popping,
   Your idea for the hub is good. I agree with btulloh098, it would be a good idea to publish under the title of your article as a new hub.
   
   Also it would be a good idea to expand on the topic, at least 500 words if you want your article to be found by search engines in the long run.
   
   I like your photo. At least one photo in an article is a good idea too.
   
   Hope that helps.

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   TechTonicposted 11 years ago

   Hey,
   I don't mean to hijack your thread or anything,but I was wondering if one of you experienced hubbers could have a look at my first two hubs and tell me how to improve as well.You see,this is the first time I'm writing online,so feedback is necessary for me
   Both my hubs have been featured,but hardly and visits : /
   Please have a look:
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      Sushma Webberposted 11 years agoin reply to this

      Hi TechTonic, interesting articles. A few suggestions:
      A space after the full stop and a comma.
      Titles should be less than 67 characters
      Titles should be specific, in case of Sony Xperia, it would be a good idea to add words like smart phone or mobile phone, whichever is closest.
      Hope that helps

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         TechTonicposted 11 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks a lot!
         You think I should edit these Hubs or leave them be and implement your suggestions in a new Hub?

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            Sushma Webberposted 11 years agoin reply to this

            Please go ahead and edit the current hubs. No effort is wasted. Your hubs will be there for a long time and it is important to keep to a good quality standard.

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      freecampingaussieposted 11 years agoin reply to this

      I would start it off diferent , rather than " Hey Guys ? Ask a question that will get peoples attention. I personally am not interested in reading product reviews so would pass by them while hub hopping but you need a comment button at the bottom for those that do .

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         TechTonicposted 11 years agoin reply to this

         there is a comment box at the bottom.
         can you please check again?

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   freecampingaussieposted 11 years ago

   I would try find the poem & and add it in the hub,  make it longer and include a comment box at the bottom .

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