dream gurl

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   jesse vermaposted 13 years ago

   
   ay thiz iz 4 my dream gurl
   Ya lips are so exquisite
   but I dont know what is it
   your lips your hair
   wat it is I dont care
   its got me hypnotized catch me starin glarin locked on your eyes
   i Can see the fire burnin in our lives and you can see right past the lies and you portray what I idolize
   dream gurl when i;m with ya time stops
   I feel like i'm on top
   but not like a prince but a king
   gurl you know that i'm gonna give you a diamond ring
   my heart is true is yours i'll even give you the key to the door
   
   I drink to ease the pain I smoke weed to keep from going insane.
   You don’t have to ask twice girl I’ll kiss you in the rain as I’m checkin you’re A-frame.
   I’ll tell ya girl you take away the pain, and you keep my spirit tame.
   You are like my sunrise it’s such a nice surprise to wake and see another day.
   See you and me the same but opposite, like you’re my other half.
   Fillin my heart with mass see you and me we got this perfect chemistry.
   And I know this is the way it should be.
   When you kiss me you make my body shiver with anticipation.
   Of a relationship that could be possibly lead to me fertilizing you with the seed.
   That could be the next Muhamed Ali.
   But seriously you mean the world to me and I love you boo I don’t ever want to hear the words we threw.
   
   Foever you will remain my dream gurl
   My feelings for you are like a never ending river.
   When you ask me if I think we’re gonna last forever n ever.
   I tell u for me its endeavourer.
   As long as my heart beats and we are together I know I am complete.
   Cuz my feelings for you guarantee that I am going to remain true.
   From the bottom of my heart to the depths of my soul I know I love you.
   cuz you suspend and un bend and became part of my heart.
   And made it into abstract art.
   My only hope it that you don’t tear it apart.
   I know that as long as our hearts are combined together.
   I know that we are going to last forever and ever dream gurl.

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      Justsilvieposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      awww i really like thiz poem too.

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      saleheensblogposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      you should make a hub with it

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         Jaggedfrostposted 13 years agoin reply to this

         OP you will at least get a wider audience that way.  via etiquette we generally don't look for or read poems done here.  This is for discussion topics.

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      MalAdjustedposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      This is amazing.

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   Home Girlposted 13 years ago

   11 drops of valerianum in a warm camomile tea before going to bed might help greatly...

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   Awakened Lightposted 13 years ago

   Nice write Jesse. I like the way it flowed.

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      jesse vermaposted 10 years agoin reply to this

      Hella thanks

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   Awakened Lightposted 13 years ago

   Nice write Jesse. I like the way it flowed.

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   kasiaplposted 13 years ago

   Nice

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   reallygoodpoetryposted 13 years ago

   nice pome

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   Beth37posted 10 years ago

   Im trying to figure out how the pic you included has to do with your dream gurl. Is that her or....?

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      jesse vermaposted 10 years agoin reply to this

      Dats me In the blue tall tee

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         Beth37posted 10 years agoin reply to this

         So... why do you have a pic. of yourself at the top of a love letter to a gurl? It's seems a bit confusing.

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   EncephaloiDeadposted 10 years ago

   Looks like the 'dream gurl' referred to in the poem is anyone who is physically attractive under the influence of alcohol and pot.

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      jesse vermaposted 10 years agoin reply to this

      I'm still Schering there was this one girl that was the world to me but her drugs  where more inportin then our kid..

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   Beth37posted 10 years ago

   I guess we'll never know.

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