I need some input

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   ClassyRichardsonposted 14 years ago

   I love to write poems and I would like to see if everyone likes this one as much as I do. Thank You.
   
   What is Beauty
   
   Unaware and delusional
   Staring at the beauty that stood before her
   So close and so touchable
   Life seemed to stop and stood behind her
   Not a blemish not a scrape
   So perfect Made gold look like waste
   O how I wish to be her
   So may will bow and respect her
   Her confidences soar along with the eagles
   And her gentleness felt softer than silk
   She held herself with elegance
   And her pride stood masculine as the lion
   Now being aware, and stepping out of delusion
   She notice the beauty that stood before her
   Her own image in the mirror,
   Showing the reflection of her inner soul
   That she kept so pure
   More pure than precious gold
   And now able to see
   Her own beauty that was held within

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   Ambitionposted 14 years ago

   very nice written, why don't you make hub of this payment

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      ClassyRichardsonposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      I'm still learning how to work this site. It would be nice to have some help.

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   dannyb1974posted 14 years ago

   very nice
   what you can do is write a new hub with a new poem
   ad your adsense etc and when people click through you earn!!
   
   good if earning is not your main goal though as peoms are so inspirational.
   you could then add amazon and reccomend some books that you like or use, again when people buy you earn a bit.
   
   all the best
   
   
   danny

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      ClassyRichardsonposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks Danny I'll try that

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