Poetry

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   Pamda Manposted 14 years ago

   http://hubpages.com/hub/How-To-Write-Good-Poetry
   
   I just wrote this hub and wanted to see what you think of it. Is it good or bad? Anything I could add? Just wanted to see your views.
   
   Panda Man

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   blondepoetposted 14 years ago

   I certainly did Pamda

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   Pamda Manposted 14 years ago

   x2 (or x3?)

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      blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Lol what do you mean a Playstation??

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   Pamda Manposted 14 years ago

   Lol. Never mind. I was trying to count the number of 's on this thread.

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      Colin T Mercerposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      I like ti poem it shows emotion which is what poetry is only on paper the only advice is to try to stay away from line that rhyme for the sake of it.
      Keep writing

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   Poppa Bluesposted 14 years ago

   Love's Refrain
   
   My Heart's beatin faster
   My temperature's on the rise
   This sweet feelin
   Is impossible to disguise
   
   Please hold me closer
   Tell me you'll stay
   Here in my arms
   And kiss me all day
   
   I'll shower you with kisses
   Like rain from above
   And whisper in your ear
   Words filled with love
   
   Soft like putty
   Here in my arms
   Bodies pressed together
   Feelin your charms
   
   There's no place better
   Then being here with you
   For the rest of my days
   That's all I wanna do!
   
   Huggin and kissin
   The peaks of passion we'll climb
   Over the edge we'll fall
   Together ‘till the end of time
   
   Lost in this moment
   Captured by our gaze
   Our lips come together
   Our thoughts in a haze
   
   Lingering lightly while
   We look deep in our souls
   Then lips slowly parting
   Our tongues explore new worlds
   
   Lost in sweet ecstasy
   We search to find our way
   To keep this feelin growin
   To make it last all day!

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   Pamda Manposted 14 years ago

   Lolwat?

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