I'd like feedback on my Hub: Something about Agents of Shield's

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   NBYomiposted 7 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Something about Agents of Shield's "Hive" that crossed my mind (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      theraggededgeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Have you permission to post those images? If not, that may stop your hub from being approved.

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         NBYomiposted 7 years agoin reply to this

         I removed them and yet it still wasn't approved, what else am I missing?

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            SheilaMilneposted 7 years agoin reply to this

            I think the problem is more likely to be the eight or so Amazon capsules you have.  I think two is the maximum they allow these days and then only when very directly related to what you are saying, and you show that.
            
            Also you would do well to break up the text with headings to improve the readability of the article. I know you were told not to use those copyright images but if you can replace them with some you can legally use, it would help enormously.

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   Len Cannonposted 7 years ago

   I'm just going to be honest with you: no one is ever going to read this.
   
   I'm not saying the writing is bad. It doesn't matter if it is or not. This is a blog style post on a platform that is not built for that type of content.  The articles on HubPages should be things people google. Answers to questions (either "how to..." or "what is..." ) and Top 10 lists are going to be almost all that gets traffic.
   
   Your article is speculation about a genre TV show that might interest readers of a related sci-fi/television blog but no one is going to be searching for. Readers are not going to be coming to your profile every day for new interesting content because there's no mechanism for that here. Examples of sites like this where articles like yours thrive are the AV Club, io9, EW, etc.
   
   If this is the type of work you want to do, which once again, I'm not saying you shouldn't, you will probably never get any traction out of HubPages.
   
   You might consider starting a blog on tumblr, wordpress, blogger, or your own domain and trying building up a readership there.

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      Chatty Chatposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      This is really good advice.  I think Tumblr would be a good site for your article.  Tumblr is great for fan theories and speculations.  And there's already an audience on Tumblr.

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