I'd like feedback on my Hub: Do you know the Secret of Massage?

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   lvebugposted 7 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Do you know the Secret of Massage?. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      theraggededgeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Your English language skills are not up to HubPages requirements at the moment. For example, there is always a space after a comma and a period/full stop. There are a lot of grammatical errors and misused words throughout.
      
      My suggestions are that you ask someone to read through your text and help you correct the problems. Or you could try Grammarly - an online grammar checking site.
      
      Also, you must make sure the images you use are legal - you can't simply save them from other websites without permission.
      
      Your Amazon capsules don't tie in with the topic of massage. Indeed, you start off writing about massage and then veer off to beauty treatments. Perhaps you should review your title to be more specific, i.e. facial massages.
      
      Good luck.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 7 years ago

   I'd day your issues are grammar and punctuation. Here are some problems with your opening paragraph:
   A space always follows a period or comma.
   Without is one word.
   "It is one of the best effective therapy" should be "It is one of the most effective therapy"
   "Now lets us how massage makes" - "Now, let us see how massage makes"
   
   Massage is a magical word.Indeed it conveys love,security,compassion and comfort with out any spoken words.It is one of the best effective therapy for the reducing stress. In this busy world we don't have time to realize the value of massage.Now lets us how massage makes our life beautiful.Here are some tips to enhance your beauty.
   
   Errors such as these need to be eliminated to pass QA.

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      theraggededgeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      'Therapies'

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      lvebugposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thank u for your valuable comments i will try to eliminate the errors as mentioned above.

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   lvebugposted 7 years ago

   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub http://hubpages.com/food/Spicy-fish-cur … easy-steps What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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   Rupert Taylorposted 7 years ago

   It says this Hub is no longer published.

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