let's write a poem line by line

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  1. I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image61
    I*n*v*i*c*t*u*sposted 14 years ago

    time to halt disappointment past
    zampano's right, there is more to add
    as a honey drunk bee fluttering it's wicked plight
    buzzing in my ear, rosy shades obstructing my sight



    smile

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 14 years ago

    we will continue tomorrow

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    zampanoposted 14 years ago

    this is tomorrow, yesterday's forgotten
    following the sun to the west
    living words of that soul begotten
    seeking light, zest.
            Eternal will be it's only rest...

    1. tantrum profile image61
      tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Bon jour ! my friend
      You like to rhyme
      And you are very keen on it!
      For me  I'm afraid it's not the time
      I never rhyme
      before I eat!
      Bon Appetit!

  4. dohn121 profile image81
    dohn121posted 14 years ago

    No lightness of day,
    Nor the lark of morn,
    Can brighten the mood,
    Of heart so forlorn.

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    zampanoposted 14 years ago

    feed my friend, feed
    on dark hair, soft sighs and warm embrace
    I've been reading what you read
    and writing can leave a trace...

    otherwise if a cod dish you devour
    beware of bone o'the fish stuck in the bad place
    and remember the good wine gust that will all scour

    1. tantrum profile image61
      tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      I'm feeding, I'm feeding!
      and writing and reading...
      but I can't find your hubs...
      you're not leaving a trace
      and that's such a disgrace! smile cool

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        zampanoposted 14 years agoin reply to this

        maybe not, maybe not...

  6. tantrum profile image61
    tantrumposted 14 years ago

    Write a poem...you can!
    then I will be your fan! big_smile

  7. Eaglekiwi profile image75
    Eaglekiwiposted 14 years ago

    Four lines you say
    But its only Tuesday
    Gonna have to dig deep
    CUZ I really wanna sleep smile

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    zampanoposted 14 years ago

    giving birth to a hub
    from such a constipated bowel
    gets me often to the tub
    the effort soaking my towel

    1. tantrum profile image61
      tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

        lol lol lol

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 14 years ago

    thankyou for your comments
    I think you have all gone mad
    But it's stil going........ the poem
    so things aren't really too bad ???????????

    1. tantrum profile image61
      tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Of course not, dear brenda
      this poem is in my agenda.
      only a little break
      with a friend. Let me make
      amends big_smile

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    ralwusposted 14 years ago

    cruisng 'round the pages here
    I spot a thing to behold.
    String bikini made of chocolate
    Wonder would Brenda wear one? hehe

    'twas an ad seen all over the place

  11. maven101 profile image71
    maven101posted 14 years ago

    A never-ending poem, wrought with thought, a mosaic that gives us pleasure...

    A never-ending poem, begot with naught, an ending to this treasure...

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 14 years ago

    amends you say
    no not today
    sad to say
    be on your way ha ha ha ha

  13. tantrum profile image61
    tantrumposted 14 years ago

    sad....lol I'm on !! my way.........

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      \Brenda Scullyposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      only joking come back please don't have a tantrum

      1. tantrum profile image61
        tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

          I'm joking as well lol I'm in my joker mood today, so i better leave you alone  I'm in a very very evil joking mood lol

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 14 years ago

    oh no i can take it i get in jokey evil moods myself, it's part of the tantrum mentality....... sad but interesting what say you

    1. tantrum profile image61
      tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Good 4 u!! Tantrum mentality, the best 4 your mental health big_smile

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 14 years ago

    lets start this poem once again
    come on ladies come on men
    keep it going forever and a day
    This is your opportunity
    T o have your say

  16. dutchman1951 profile image61
    dutchman1951posted 14 years ago

    Brenda Scully wrote:
    amends you say
    no not today
    sad to say
    be on your way ha ha ha ha



    Dismissed buy her words,
    the cauldren sturs slow.
    above it, black crows sing.
    a sparkly diamond covering,
    of a long winters snow.
    Night awaits the Witches' sting.

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    Michael Achillesposted 14 years ago

    Chariots of woe
    piercing rain outside my window
    stand alone in the minds eye
    rantings and echos of distant lovers cry....

 
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