Would you guys be kind if i told i am a newbie

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   GiselleMartinposted 14 years ago

   I am new here, and a warm hi to my fellow hubbers. Would love any feedback for my first attempt.
   
   http://hubpages.com/hub/Buying-Guide-for-Baby-Crib

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      JYOTI KOTHARIposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      I have just clicked the link and found the hub with "no longer published" status.
      
      What happened? What's the wrong with that?
      Do you need any help?
      
      Thanks,
      Jyoti Kothari

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         GiselleMartinposted 14 years agoin reply to this

         Sorry was reediting and proofreading again, i pasted a para twice. I hope the link works now. *Keeping my fingers crossed this time*

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            JYOTI KOTHARIposted 14 years agoin reply to this

            You can allow your viewers to view the hub while editing. You need not to block them from viewing.
            Please add some videos and some more tags to let search engines find it.
            
            Thanks,
            Jyoti Kothari

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      Lady_Eposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Nice to have you on HP, Giselle
      
      Lovely First Hub, very nice layout.
      I've left comments.
      
      Ps. Made me a bit broody.

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      sneakorocksolidposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Are you a normal girl?

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   Poppa Bluesposted 14 years ago

   Welcome! My days of baby cribs are over, thank god!

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      GiselleMartinposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Thanx for the welcome, My kid is still through the baby crib phase.

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   Poppa Bluesposted 14 years ago

   Looks like you're off to a great start! It's well written with pertinent information and well arranged links. Good luck!

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   LViddamoyposted 14 years ago

   Good Hub Giselle,you have a fan here. Never a dull moment with kids.

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   Rehma Jamshedposted 14 years ago

   Welcome, where is your hub?

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   GiselleMartinposted 14 years ago

   Thank you, every day is a learning will surely add some. I need to stick around in forums for some expert advice. Thanks once again.

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      JYOTI KOTHARIposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      You can hook yourself in the forum threads and start commenting on other hubs. Please also join fan clubs and post fan mails to other hubbers' profile. Many of the hubbers will reciprocate.It will generate back links to your profile and increase traffic to your hubs.
      
      
      Thanks,
      Jyoti Kothari

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         JYOTI KOTHARIposted 14 years agoin reply to this

         Hi Gisell,
         Have you followed some of these tips? What are results?
         
         Thanks,
         Jyoti Kothari

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   Janettaposted 14 years ago

   Welcome Giselle! The forums are an excellent place to meet new people and learn all the ins and outs of hubbing!! Feel free to ask if you have any questions

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   mcbeanposted 14 years ago

   An excellent first hub.
   
   The layout is very good.
   Text only first paragraph lets adsense ads sit at the top where they are most effective.
   Good use of photos and Amazon to the right of the text.
   RSS Feed to keep google interested.
   
   To really get more traction with search engines, you are lacking video. Google loves videos.
   
   Make sure they contain your key words.
   
   try this example:
   
   http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_5FHYRslL0

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   lrohnerposted 14 years ago

   Nice job for a first try, but I do have some feedback in addition to Jyoti's. You really have to clean up the grammar, punctuation and spelling errors. That will send a whole lot of people away from your hub pretty darn quick.
   
   And people usually only purchase one crib in a lifetime and then use that for all of their babies, so most of these folks are new shoppers. I could be wrong, but I doubt that many of them will purchase a crib online. They are going to want to see, touch and feel it. So I would push a lot more accessory products in the hub to give you a better chance of some sales.

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    awareposted 14 years ago

    i hate the term newbie. apprentice .

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       sneakorocksolidposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       I like concubine.

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