CLOUD DANCER [a week in the life of a comet] a poem by TONY MARTIN

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   you suggest oneposted 14 years ago

   Raindrops,Snowflakes,
   Thunder in the sky,
   Even the moon shines brighter
   But noone knows why
   
   Faster than sound
   Yet visually still,
   No clouds to cover where you are bound
   Or to change your will.
   
   Behind you it trails
   Sparkling white
   The part we can see
   Such a wonderous sight.
   
   Yet darkness surrounds
   The light you show,
   The devastation you will cause
   Only you know.
   
   Silently you pass through the sky,
   Stirring up thoughts of
   Times and situations
   Which have passedus by.
   
   Harsh wind and cold rain
   Surround me tonight
   Bringing me comfort
   Instead of fright.
   
   When you return
   Another mind will seek the truth,
   Until then you will travel through this universe
   And remain so aloof.
   
   TONY MARTIN 29-03-1997

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      amandajolposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      That is an awesome poem!!!

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   getmybackposted 14 years ago

   LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
   
   
   
   Thank You

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      you suggest oneposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      glad you like it, plenty more where that came from,not all the same though.

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   pinkyleeposted 14 years ago

   this is a great poem but may i suggest maybe saying the others for hubs? welcome to hubpages as well! ... with doing them in hubs you can add pictures to illustrate your poems.

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   sophsposted 14 years ago

   Awww that's lovely!!
   
   I agree with Pinky, you should definately make them into hubs! Great work!

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   Beata Stasakposted 14 years ago

   What a beautiful poem Tony, 'another mind is seeking truth' and is grateful to 'taste, smell, visualise and touch' your imaginative world.
   
   Thank you, I am very humble you like my writings, I have a lot to learn from you. All the best with your writing. Beata

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      you suggest oneposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      HI Beata,we should all learn something new each day and I suppose in a way we are all teachers,I just admire those who have the guts to stand in front of the world and do it,the poems I write are but a series of dreams and I have reams of them for you to read,if only I can figure out how to republish these hubs 9I was flagged unsuitable for some reason.Keep on enjoying life.

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   Mentalist acerposted 14 years ago

   A nice poem to meditate to, Thank you....

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   kbulmerposted 13 years ago

   great poem, reminds me of much of my poetry, very reflective and full of insight...bravo..more!

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