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  1. karmen88 profile image71
    karmen88
    61 posts
    Joined: 4 months ago
    Hubs: 6
    Followers: 21

    Hello smile I'm new on here and I just did 3 hubs. If you can give me some feedback on either one of them I would appreciate it!

    Posted 4 months ago
  2. Lady_E profile image96
    Lady_E
    1591 posts
    Joined: 8 months ago
    Hubs: 83
    Followers: 512

    karmen88 wrote:

    Hello smile I'm new on here and I just did 3 hubs. If you can give me some feedback on either one of them I would appreciate it!

    Hiya Karmen

    Well done on your Hubs. Love the one about Flawless skin - maybe a picture of someone with clear skin would have been nice, but its still okay.

    Mcdonalds - This Hub made me Hungry, but putting that aside, there are many pics but no text. Maybe you could insert a Paragraph on why you like McD and what your favourite meal is. Just a few lines.  (i.e. What message are you hoping to get across to people, when they read?)

    Look forward to reading from you. I see you are in to Dermatology and I love anything to do with skin care.

    Enjoy HP.

    Your lastest Fan, E.  smile

    Posted 4 months ago
  3. HubTub profile image75
    HubTub
    66 posts
    Joined: 11 months ago
    Hubs: 7
    Followers: 14

    karmen88 wrote:

    Hello smile I'm new on here and I just did 3 hubs. If you can give me some feedback on either one of them I would appreciate it!

    Welcome!  Google loves content (especially original content).  Your hubs are looking great.  My only suggestion would be to add more content to your hubs, especially since you mentioned in your biography that you love to write.  If you do this, with the rest of the graphics you already have in your hubs, you'll be even more fantastic!

    Wishing you the best in your career as a dermatologist as well.

    Posted 4 months ago
  4. karmen88 profile image71
    karmen88
    61 posts
    Joined: 4 months ago
    Hubs: 6
    Followers: 21

    Thanks for the feedback. Thank you for becoming a fan Lady E and I appreciate the well wishes HubTub. smile It looks like I need to write more. I think I'll learn from looking around at other peoples hubs.

    Posted 4 months ago
  5. futurenetads profile image81
    futurenetads
    179 posts
    Joined: 9 months ago
    Hubs: 142
    Followers: 266

    Hi Karmen

    Welcome to Hubpages

    Tips For Flawless Skin hub is very nice and I am waiting see more interesting hubs from u

    keep going

    Posted 4 months ago
 
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