Perfectly said the first time
- Sunny Baldwin
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Poetry is heaven sent
unchangable flowing from my pen
not erased and then placed again
someplace close to my original thought,
but not the same I find
when perfectly said the first time.
75- free4india
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Poets have poetic license !
88- words cocktail
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Sunny Baldwin wrote:
Poetry is heaven sent
unchangable flowing from my pen
not erased and then placed again
someplace close to my original thought,
but not the same I find
when perfectly said the first time.
wow..well written-instant & straight
it was so 'feel alike' to read this..thanks!
91- prettydarkhorse
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Sunny Baldwin wrote:
Poetry is heaven sent
unchangable flowing from my pen
not erased and then placed again
someplace close to my original thought,
but not the same I find
when perfectly said the first time.
Poetry is from the heart
It starts from there and above
it flows far and beyond
Reaching its heart out
even though sometimes you may doubt
what life is all about- 88
- words cocktail
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prettydarkhorse wrote:
Poetry is from the heart
It starts from there and above
it flows far and beyond
Reaching its heart out
even though sometimes you may doubt
what life is all aboutWow to you too prettyDH
I liked it..just the way
it simply came out..
very precise! - 91
- prettydarkhorse
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words cocktail wrote:
prettydarkhorse wrote:
Poetry is from the heart
It starts from there and above
it flows far and beyond
Reaching its heart out
even though sometimes you may doubt
what life is all aboutWow to you too prettyDH
I liked it..just the way
it simply came out..
very precise!yes it does, you seem to be very good at poems too, i checked your hubs...
