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WHISPERS

  1. landilin profile image8
    landilinposted 2 years ago

    WHISPER
    REACHING LIKE A BABY CRYING FOR MOTHERS WARM COMFORTING ARMS
    TURNING ME AWAY LIKE THE SOLDIERS WHOM MARCH OUT FOR WAR.
          WHISPER
    THROUGH THE WINDS AS IT CARRIES LEAVES OF MANY COLORS,BUT SOON TO BE DESTROYED BY THE EARTHS AND NATURES, TO BE OR NOT, BUT WITHOUT A MOUTH TO SHARE IT'S TRAVISTIES.
          WHISPER
    LIKE FRIENDS IN A CELL TELLING A PATH OF FREEDOM AND GRACE,AND NOT FREEDOM IS WHAT THEY HAVE.HERE YE'S WHISPER ENTERING THE PAGE INTO ONES MIND AS CALM AS THE SEA ON A HOT SUMMER DAY,SOAKING INTO THE CHAMBERS OF THE MIND AND SPEAKING ONLY WHEN THOUGHT,AND ONLY WHEN TOLD.SO WHISPER AND SOMEONE WILL HERE.
    NOT ONLY WHEN SPOKEN OR TOLD
    WHISPERS YOU SEEK UNTO THEE
    WHISPERS SOME CANNOT HOLD.
                          WHISPER

    1. fratjoe18 profile image63
      fratjoe18posted 2 years ago in reply to this

      I love this, thanks for sharing it

  2. AdeleCosgroveBray profile image88
    AdeleCosgroveBrayposted 2 years ago

    Why are you posting your poetry in upper-case letters?  Is there some aesthetic reason for your choice, or is your keyboard jammed?  smile

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    poetlorraineposted 2 years ago

    if you want to be heard speak quietly, or whisper  nice thread

 
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