RAIN

  1. landilin
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    PAIN
    HERE ME MY LOVE FOR YOURS I WANT TO BE
    TO BE, BE TRUE LOVE FOR ME
    SPAKE OF LUST THE BIRDS AND BEES
    BETWEEN GULFS I LUST YOU AND ME
    COMPLAIN
    GALLOPING WITH MY GAY APPARELL
    THE CLOUDS START SHOWERING ME
    IF YOU STOPPED TO THINK CALLING ME
    IT'S SOMETHING YOU DID NOT SEE

    UPON YOUR SCREAMS, TO YOUR COMMANDS
    AFTER ARGUING VICIOUSLY
    SUDDENLY THE RAIN STOPS SHOWERING DOWN
    YOU WIPED MY FACE SO CLEAN

    SHOCKED MY LOVE FOR NOW YOU CAN SEE
    THE PAIN HAS GONE FROM ME
    I'VE HIDDEN MY PAIN LONG ENOGH
    THE TEARS IN MY EYES YOU NOW SEE.

    Posted 6 weeks ago
  2. prettydarkhorse profile image91
    prettydarkhorse
    3194 posts
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    landilin wrote:

    PAIN
    HERE ME MY LOVE FOR YOURS I WANT TO BE
    TO BE, BE TRUE LOVE FOR ME
    SPAKE OF LUST THE BIRDS AND BEES
    BETWEEN GULFS I LUST YOU AND ME
    COMPLAIN
    GALLOPING WITH MY GAY APPARELL
    THE CLOUDS START SHOWERING ME
    IF YOU STOPPED TO THINK CALLING ME
    IT'S SOMETHING YOU DID NOT SEE

    UPON YOUR SCREAMS, TO YOUR COMMANDS
    AFTER ARGUING VICIOUSLY
    SUDDENLY THE RAIN STOPS SHOWERING DOWN
    YOU WIPED MY FACE SO CLEAN

    SHOCKED MY LOVE FOR NOW YOU CAN SEE
    THE PAIN HAS GONE FROM ME
    I'VE HIDDEN MY PAIN LONG ENOGH
    THE TEARS IN MY EYES YOU NOW SEE.

    that is painfully sweet

    Posted 6 weeks ago
  3. retellect profile image85
    retellect
    215 posts
    Joined: 2 months ago
    Hubs: 29
    Followers: 67

    landilin wrote:

    PAIN
    HERE ME MY LOVE FOR YOURS I WANT TO BE
    TO BE, BE TRUE LOVE FOR ME
    SPAKE OF LUST THE BIRDS AND BEES
    BETWEEN GULFS I LUST YOU AND ME
    COMPLAIN
    GALLOPING WITH MY GAY APPARELL
    THE CLOUDS START SHOWERING ME
    IF YOU STOPPED TO THINK CALLING ME
    IT'S SOMETHING YOU DID NOT SEE

    UPON YOUR SCREAMS, TO YOUR COMMANDS
    AFTER ARGUING VICIOUSLY
    SUDDENLY THE RAIN STOPS SHOWERING DOWN
    YOU WIPED MY FACE SO CLEAN

    SHOCKED MY LOVE FOR NOW YOU CAN SEE
    THE PAIN HAS GONE FROM ME
    I'VE HIDDEN MY PAIN LONG ENOGH
    THE TEARS IN MY EYES YOU NOW SEE.

    What a beautiful poem.......I can feel the emotion in your words. Write a hub smile

    Posted 6 weeks ago
 
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