Tears of Rain

I've been waiting for you

To come and save me

From my dreary day

I's funny how you wash things away

When I need you the most

Pitter Patter

On my window

I hear you coming down

Cleaning away all my fears

I always know when you come around

Wiping out all the torment

And the haziness where I was stuck

You brought back my dreams

And fantasies with luck

You sing to my soul

Everytime you show yourself

And leave me feeling clear

You a gentle whisper

Will always be very dear


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-Crimmy- 4 years ago

Nicely done! Voted up.


V Qisya 4 years ago

"You sing to my soul"...Wow!

Beautifully written, Caroline. I loved it! Take care. Up and away ;)

Best Wishes, V


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daydreamer13 4 years ago

Beautiful!


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Crimmy - thanks!

VQisya - thank you for your support.

Daydreamer - thank you. It's always good to see you.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful..


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Always.


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Debra Verville 4 years ago from USA

Nice! Voted up. And I love the rain.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thanks Debra for stopping by and reading!


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dinkan53 4 years ago from India

Beautiful writing. These are the sweetest things I ever heard about the rain. I love the smell around when rain just starts and rainy season is the time I feel most active. rated up and beautiful.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Dinkan thank you for reading and leaving your wonderful comment. :)


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago

Beautiful Caroline.. there is nothing like the smell and sound of rain to the soul... But for me it is time of purging of any sadness within me. It always leaves me feeling great :) Thanks for sharing :) Shalom!


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Shimmering Dawn thank you for your heartfelt comment! I am glad you liked it. :)


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April Reynolds 4 years ago from Arizona

Wonderful poem Caroline, and a great picture too. :)


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

April thank you so much. :)


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Jspot 4 years ago from Flames of water and love

If I get a tear in my eyes it is because of the depth of beauty portrayed in your words. I see you are much of an Empath in your way to listen and the desire to help. Beautiful that is.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Jspot thank you for your comment, yes I am in a way. I'm glad you liked my poem.


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KDee411 4 years ago from Bay Area, California

I really love your poem and the picture is fantastic. Can I use it? I'll let you use my upside down rainbow, I think you'll like it. It's on my first hub today, hope you come on over. Ithis is my new name.

You so lucky your such a good writer. I never learned but I'm learning.

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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hi KDee thanks for the compliments! Go ahead and use the pic I don't mind. :)

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