The Young Widow - Loss

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How fitting it would be to say that I lost you and you lost me

I sit here in our home starring at the last place you position was known

I still search, tho many months roll by, because you were just here by my side

I just had you here in my hands. What my mind and body knows, my heart and soul does not want to understand.

The Persistence of Memory

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Loss

For those of us who go through the sudden loss of a loved one, it is very difficult to come to terms with reality. I know what is real. That is not the problem at all. It is the surreal feeling that takes a while to leave you. Some people feel this more than others. I feel for the mother's who lose young children. In any example, youthful death is hard to swallow.

Most parents have had a tiny dose of this feeling of surreal loss at least once. If you ever looked away from your little one for a split second and had them disappear, you have had a small taste of it. Your eyebrows squish together, panic sets in, and your mind attacks. They were just here. This makes no sense. I think I was there, in that mental state for months. The worst of it, of coarse being the first few weeks. In the first days, you wake up still expecting to greet your loved one and every morning you have to recall what your new truth is. The question comes into your mind, 'was it a nightmare?' Of coarse, condolence cards and other evidence sends the truth racing back into your brain. No one tells you how much longer never is than forever.

I don't know if you go through the same motions that I do. I usually lose something. Lets say it was my keys. I will go to the place that I thought I last placed them. I will look else where and constantly gravitate to the place that they should be. For every new place that I search unsuccessfully, I will go re-check the place they should be. I had the same feeling and habits about my husband. I was given directions the afternoon before, which I followed. Death, however, does not play fair or make sense. He should have been in our home, so I kept looking for a long time because it made no sense that he would leave so early. It is not how it was supposed to be. That one last sentence holds you in your place of grief for a really long time. You are just stuck looking for what was lost and what was supposed to be. It is your very own underland filled with strange creatures. Curiouser and curiouser...
I actually remember trying to describe the surreal world that grief had thrown me into. I told someone that I was living in a world painted by Salvador Dali.

I imagine for a mother who loses a child it is the same or worse. There are toys, clothes, and everything else in the room waiting for them. That is where they should be. They were just there a second ago. It makes no sense that they are not here now. All these statements of disbelief like: but I just saw them, we just made plans, and they were just here keep pounding into your brain that this nightmare is not the truth, they are not lost, they are misplaced and will be found soon.

I am now okay with reflecting back, I couldn't put it into words before. That is the only reason that I am able to attempt to describe this bout of insanity, tho I am not sure how effective it will be. There are so many people out there who want to know what it is like. They want to offer loving support to friends and relatives in grief but truly do not understand so they really are at a loss for words. Maybe if they had an idea of what they were going thru, you could be more supportive. I guess this is one reason that I write it.

If this makes no sense at all, it just shows me that perhaps I was not as ready as I thought I was to explain this particular part of grief. While some parts still seem fake at times, I am past this part. Thank the Lord!


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

I love your young widow.. this wasn't in my prints so you must have just did this one and I missed it.. or I missed it.. you shoulde-book this little series :) Frank.. Smashwords.com if I didn't read it here I would have purchased it via e-book yep.. too late!!! I already have them-- just dont make it so per... do what you will it;s you Frank


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Moms-Secret 4 years ago from Central Florida Author

Thank you Frank. You are right. This one is a new addition. You have not missed it. I am so happy that you enjoy the writing so much that you actually collect them. It's really flattering. I am a collector's item.

I am putting something together for publishing that is in support of widows that is a lot less personal compared to these writings. It is hard for me to write without you being able to see me. It is a super slow process tho since I have trouble focusing. I should have it done before 2022 if I am lucky :D...

I remember giving my Mom a copy of my book. She freaked out completely because the main character is a victim and some of her personality came from me. I was missing for a few years while I was in the military so she really worried that the story was based on life experiences. Poor Mom, lol...


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

poor you.. come let me give you a hug.. a big one.. now now.. just come for the hug...:) Frank


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Moms-Secret 4 years ago from Central Florida Author

I left your hug on your story's page... funny Frank...


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unikorna 4 years ago

Words are so useless so instead I shall kiss you on both cheeks and hold you tight. It broke my heart reading about your sorrow,,,I really hope it will get better in time, or a bit more tolerable. If you have a blog I'd love to visit and see how you're doing. Kisses and hugs from the other side of the world...Eastern Europe.


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Moms-Secret 4 years ago from Central Florida Author

This is such a sweet comment, it made me feel...

I do have a blog that has been dormant. http://lissetteriena.blogspot.com/

I have 2 actually. I see that you have found one. I am happy to have you. Happier still to meet you. I hope to hear from you more.

Thank you.


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Tami Fite 4 years ago

My mom and best friend slipped into eternity two weeks ago -- I can completely relate to where you were at this time -- I feel like it is a dream, but I have not woken up ;\ If I didn't have Faith in God and her eternal existence, I do not know how I would make it through -- sorry for your loss! Tami


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Moms-Secret 4 years ago from Central Florida Author

I am so sorry to hear that you have lost loved ones. My heart goes out to you. The ups and downs of grief is not something that I want for others although I know that it will always come. I am happy to hear that you have faith. It will be extremely valuable to you from here on.

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