4 p.m.
594 p.m. was my favorite time
you used to wait for her
I used to wait for mine
time was flyin’
who would have thought
that’s the right place
and the right time
who would have thought
I’d cling to you
in one corner of wrong avenue
And so the clock hit to four
you were smilin’ at me more and more
in your stare I’ve seen what you’ve been dreamin’
and your voice told me I should believe it…
‘t was 4 o’clock in the aftie
when time runs so slow
still my boyfriend won’t show up
and no sign of your girl though
who would have thought
we’d share that moment
odd excitement
who would have thought
I’d cling to you
in one corner of wrong avenue
And so the clock hit to four
you were talkin’ to me more and more
in your angst I’ve felt what you’ve been missin’
and your sad face told me I should change it…
We met again at 4 p.m.
but just like any other time
4 p.m. couldn’t be forever
Everythin’ ended out of line
***a long time ago
written 04052008
© 2009-Nov. b l a i s e
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Comments
haha yeah my fave too ;p
though that was so wrong
thanks Randy!
Beautiful.:) Always happy to read your work. God Bless.
thanks a lot Keira for the usual visit :)
you're a great writer. God bless always :)
Life eh... timing is a good and bad thing.... brings us to where we need to be, shows us the possibilities.... temptation abound...
Nicely written
thanks Enigmatic ;p
yeah every tick of time is a possibility..
Wow, I love this Blaise. Opens the doors for imaginative imagery. :)
glad you loved it Ken :)
twas a poem I made last year, but made it a lyrical poem instead. I'm glad it opens a door for you.. thanks!
Two disillusioned souls
left waiting for the
missing two who caused
their dissappointment,
suddenly find each other
across the emptiness
that surrounds them,
thus happenstance
becomes romance.....
truly a lovely tale,
told daily and nightly
all across the world.
~~~~MFB III
thanks for the comment MFB III
very poetic ;p
that's lovely, liked it!
Nice! I could sense being there.
thanks for passing by Micky Dee :)
Really nice Blaise.I think I've been
on Wrong Avenue before.
really Dark Heart? LOL
Wrong Avenue is a place I dare not to go back hehe
thanks friend! :)















Randy Behavior says:
3 months ago
Nice. First stanza was my favorite. :)