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Picture the Tongue as a Garden (A Cunnilingus Poem)

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By DJ Funktual


I Made This With Those Magnetic Words on my Fridge in NYC! ~1996

It certainly feels strange to put a comment box under a poem as I'm sure it must be strange to try and think of a relative reply. With that in mind, I would like to welcome you all to do me a solid and just leave me a smiley or something so I know you've been here. Thanks in advance. Yours truly, DJ Funktual

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I once gave an "Oral Report" on this subject in a Sexual Education class at Nassau Community College. The first thing I did was turn off the lights in the classroom and turn on some MAXWELL who, if you don't know if the champion of sex music especially his now classic debut, MAXWELL's Urban Hang Suite.

Without further adieu:

Picture the Tongue as a Garden

Those urges to honey smear

her pink easy moment

produce you, the symphony

vision of delirious whispers.

Her leg petals bare my sweet

aching place beneath lust,

where she will manipulate sweat

like a hot beat over me.

A drooling goddess, she will

chant and heave on my fingers.

Surfing waves of butter drunk

wanting. Listening and hearing.

Please woman, permit my ego

these delicate worship times,

for your singing sighs fill

this lazy dreamer with rediculous worth!

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About-The-Home profile image

About-The-Home  says:
2 years ago

A taste of things to come!

funride profile image

funride  says:
2 years ago

:-P :LOL:

Cool!

Rik Ravado profile image

Rik Ravado  says:
2 years ago

I thought Cunnilingus was an Irish Airline?

Roderic Aldrich profile image

Roderic Aldrich  says:
2 years ago

I thought you said cunning linguist!

DJ Funktual profile image

DJ Funktual  says:
2 years ago

Nope, but I am a Cunnilinguist!

Iðunn profile image

Iðunn  says:
2 years ago

Rik, I've noticed that connection too. DJ, not sure what Staff will make of it, but I'm glad I got to read your piece, so to speak. :)

DJ Funktual profile image

DJ Funktual  says:
2 years ago

Is that why my HUB is at 43 even though people keep reading it!

Iðunn profile image

Iðunn  says:
2 years ago

if there is a penalty it should say at the top, so no, if there is not. lately, I put one out and it drops to about 43, then rises again. think it's a lag issue. not sure, though.

Shirley Anderson profile image

Shirley Anderson  says:
2 years ago

Cool :)

About-The-Home profile image

About-The-Home  says:
2 years ago

I see your hub score is currently 77 but I feel 69 might have been more appropriate.

Did you tick the adult content box btw?

Gerry

DJ Funktual profile image

DJ Funktual  says:
2 years ago

Did I what? tick the adult content box? I don't have any idea what that is or what it means.

Keny Luger profile image

Keny Luger  says:
2 years ago

Lol. As I read this the score is 69.

One of the ads on this page says "May We Pray For You?"

Another says "Worship Jesus Christ". Not very contextual.

DJ Funktual profile image

DJ Funktual  says:
2 years ago

Hubscore is still 69. 3 weeks later. Somethings are meant to be.

DJ Funktual profile image

DJ Funktual  says:
15 months ago

People read this poem everyday and never comment. Hmmm...

Bongocopter  says:
6 months ago

:-)

debugs profile image

debugs  says:
7 days ago

It's a beautiful expression of the act... it isn't lusty, but more of soulish!

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