Picture the Tongue as a Garden (A Cunnilingus Poem)
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I Made This With Those Magnetic Words on my Fridge in NYC! ~1996
It certainly feels strange to put a comment box under a poem as I'm sure it must be strange to try and think of a relative reply. With that in mind, I would like to welcome you all to do me a solid and just leave me a smiley or something so I know you've been here. Thanks in advance. Yours truly, DJ Funktual
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I once gave an "Oral Report" on this subject in a Sexual Education class at Nassau Community College. The first thing I did was turn off the lights in the classroom and turn on some MAXWELL who, if you don't know if the champion of sex music especially his now classic debut, MAXWELL's Urban Hang Suite.
Without further adieu:
Picture the Tongue as a Garden
Those urges to honey smear
her pink easy moment
produce you, the symphony
vision of delirious whispers.
Her leg petals bare my sweet
aching place beneath lust,
where she will manipulate sweat
like a hot beat over me.
A drooling goddess, she will
chant and heave on my fingers.
Surfing waves of butter drunk
wanting. Listening and hearing.
Please woman, permit my ego
these delicate worship times,
for your singing sighs fill
this lazy dreamer with rediculous worth!
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:-P :LOL:
Cool!
I thought Cunnilingus was an Irish Airline?
I thought you said cunning linguist!
Nope, but I am a Cunnilinguist!
Rik, I've noticed that connection too. DJ, not sure what Staff will make of it, but I'm glad I got to read your piece, so to speak. :)
Is that why my HUB is at 43 even though people keep reading it!
if there is a penalty it should say at the top, so no, if there is not. lately, I put one out and it drops to about 43, then rises again. think it's a lag issue. not sure, though.
Cool :)
I see your hub score is currently 77 but I feel 69 might have been more appropriate.
Did you tick the adult content box btw?
Gerry
Did I what? tick the adult content box? I don't have any idea what that is or what it means.
Lol. As I read this the score is 69.
One of the ads on this page says "May We Pray For You?"
Another says "Worship Jesus Christ". Not very contextual.
Hubscore is still 69. 3 weeks later. Somethings are meant to be.
People read this poem everyday and never comment. Hmmm...
:-)
It's a beautiful expression of the act... it isn't lusty, but more of soulish!



















About-The-Home says:
2 years ago
A taste of things to come!