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A Dark Autumn Night

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By Pete Maida


 

If you go out on All Hollow’s Eve,

when the clock shows it’s later than eight.

If you stroll in the woods cause you don’t believe,

then this may be your fate.

 

As the sun sets the ghouls rise

on a chilled and dark autumn night.

Graves open their ghastly surprise,

as the world prepares for a fright.

 

Across the field in the darkening wood

you hear the howls and the moans.

As hell opens up as only it could

spewing out skeletons with blood stained bones.

 

There is no safety in the sky,

as giant bats take to wing.

Scanning for warm bodies as they fly,

for consuming blood is their thing.

 

The largest one lands on the grass before you,

and you know it is not what it seems.

You stand frozen as it transforms and comes for you.

In the full moon the vampire gleams.

 

Its great cape swoops around you

and there is nothing that you can do,

as the fangs pierce the flesh of your neck.

You feel a sharp pain,

and you feel the blood drain,

as you start your own nightmare trek.

 

Six others carry you to the hill,

and the wind is dead still,

as you’re lowered to your place in the ground.

There you will stay

in the cold earth through the day

with no life, no movement, no sound.

 

But on a dark autumn night

you will awaken and fight,

through the box and the dirt and the mud.

Through the ground you will burst

with an insatiable thirst,

for the taste of warm human blood.

 

On All Hollow’s Eve

the undead will retrieve,

their power and place in the land.

So hold on tight

through that dark autumn night,

and keep a garlic in your right hand.

 

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Tom Cornett profile image

Tom Cornett  says:
3 months ago

Spooky Pete....going to pick up some garlic at the grocery today...bats are just creepy....thanks for the chill. :)

Lady_E profile image

Lady_E  says:
3 months ago

Yeah very spooky. Honestly, while I was reading it, I could here the theme Music of Michael Jackson's thriller playing in the background of my mind. Weird... too much coffee.

You have a way with words, Pete. It's really good. :)

ethel smith profile image

ethel smith  says:
3 months ago

Yes and I think I'll keep a small crucifix in my left hand. Spooky

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ethel smith  says:
3 months ago

SimplyDrina profile image

SimplyDrina  says:
3 months ago

Wow!

thanglynn07 profile image

thanglynn07  says:
3 months ago

Wow! Perfect mood to set with Halloween approaching! Beautifully written! Loved the melody of it! And I love all things vampire-related!

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Army Infantry Mom  says:
3 months ago

Awesome poem Pete - I'll skip the garlic and go packed with a wooden stake, perhaps a gun with a silver bullet or two also, never know what roams in the woods.

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erin boote  says:
3 months ago

Pete, this was really exceptional, and scared me actually..lol. I will now be very scared when I visit St. Mary's at dusk, since after all we are facing many dark autumn nights, and I'll be sure to bring some garlic with me! Just love it, you're writing is awesome.

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bingskee  says:
3 months ago

it's like michael jackson's thriller night!

Tracy711 profile image

Tracy711  says:
3 months ago

Wonderful poem it did scare me though..lol but I love the way you write..I'm so glad I found you in this big world of hubpages..Thank you for sharing God Bless.

Peggy W profile image

Peggy W  says:
3 months ago

This would be a tale that would scare young kids for sure! You had some fun with this one...I can tell. (Smile)

Pete Maida profile image

Pete Maida  says:
3 months ago

You're right Peggy I did.

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