A Poem
62A Poem:?
I was asked to write a poem containing the following words
soul please apple streets secret dark begging fruit heart
I am not sure if I am a poet but let´s try it. Here it is...
Emptiness
in the dark streets
leading to the secret places
of forgotten emptiness
you meet the old wise man
begging for an apple
please, give me this fruit ...
and your heart and soul
will be free
to join the other universe
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Thanks for the comment, I just decided to became a poet!
love this! Here I'm giving it a try:
Walking these apple streets
I'm begging for the dark fruit
And my soul asks, please give me the secret
of your soul.
I have to agree with I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s . . .it speaks volumes and then some. I really liked it. . and look forward to your new status as a poet!
Thanks, kartika, thanks wavegirl22, for encouragement, let's go on!
Poets make the world go round and life worth living!
Seems you are a poet! You should try it more often. :D
Great poem very insightful
wow, nice poem Bernd, I dont knwo that you can write too aside from your music, how are you? Maita
You indeed are a poet my friend nextstopjupiter, warm and inviting words!
Ben
I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s says:
5 weeks ago
wow, this speeks volumes! Nice :)